GAWD I LOVE THIS CHAPTER TO BITS. READING this made me nearly cry at it's brilliance. "Your tears are yours to shed, they represent your personal pain and suffering. “I don’t have your heart, Hyuk.” Never show them to just anyone, they should only be for those you would trust with your life" JUST.LET.ME.DIE.AT.THESE.WORDS!!!
Just had to start with that confession. Everything about this chapter was just....gah I have no words. well okay I lie, I have a few words to say. In the beginning it was quite interesting Eunhyuk's and Donghae's different opinions about the human slaves. I guess Donghae's is still new to this world, and a part of him may never leave that human side of him deep inside. I smiled at that whole Hyukjae talking to the cows, and Donghae teasing him about it. It had this sense of domestic cuteness that hasn't been shown much with them two till now. YAY *rejoices at Sungmin's return* because I think he's quite vital to the story and was I the only one who found the interraction between him and Kyuhyun utterly adorable. probably not. The whole NC-17 part was just beautiful. I'm clearly unable to think of better adjectives or ways to describe how this story makes me feel, because after reading it apparently I've become illiterate. good times. As I progress through the story there always seems to be this gnawing feeling that something is wrong though, and it seems to be Hyukjae's fault. I'm not quite sure exactly what it is, but It's just a feeling I have. The end part of this chapter was what I loved the best. It was like a moment of realisation, confrontation and confession between them. Because I think Donghae was always just wondering if he was the only one who felt like they were becoming one. I have to say, how quickly Eunhyuk said his heart was Donghae's surprised me quite a bit. Probably because I've focused too much on what Donghae was feeling, that I forgot that to consider Eunhyuk's feelings and his trust towards Donghae.
Wish I could write a better comment than this pathetic one but real life calls. Time contraints. Gets in the way so much. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
I'm glad you liked it so much!! I totally got emotional writing that scene because all of their love and fear was just pouring out of me. it was pretty hard.
well, keep in mind that while Donghae may have been an Ipsuren for a year now, Hyuk has been one for 51 years. Which is way more than double the length of time he spent as a human. So he's probably pretty preconditioned to think negatively about a race he's been detached from for so long.
I'm happy Sungmin is back too! and no, a couple people said that the first kyumin interaction was cute ^^
I want to say more in response to the other things you mentioned, but I don't want to give away too much!
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I'll talk to you later this week ♥
(lol i responded with my personal LJ at first~ oops)
"Your tears are yours to shed, they represent your personal pain and suffering.
“I don’t have your heart, Hyuk.”
Never show them to just anyone, they should only be for those you would trust with your life"
JUST.LET.ME.DIE.AT.THESE.WORDS!!!
Just had to start with that confession. Everything about this chapter was just....gah I have no words. well okay I lie, I have a few words to say.
In the beginning it was quite interesting Eunhyuk's and Donghae's different opinions about the human slaves. I guess Donghae's is still new to this world, and a part of him may never leave that human side of him deep inside. I smiled at that whole Hyukjae talking to the cows, and Donghae teasing him about it. It had this sense of domestic cuteness that hasn't been shown much with them two till now.
YAY *rejoices at Sungmin's return* because I think he's quite vital to the story and was I the only one who found the interraction between him and Kyuhyun utterly adorable. probably not.
The whole NC-17 part was just beautiful. I'm clearly unable to think of better adjectives or ways to describe how this story makes me feel, because after reading it apparently I've become illiterate. good times.
As I progress through the story there always seems to be this gnawing feeling that something is wrong though, and it seems to be Hyukjae's fault. I'm not quite sure exactly what it is, but It's just a feeling I have.
The end part of this chapter was what I loved the best. It was like a moment of realisation, confrontation and confession between them. Because I think Donghae was always just wondering if he was the only one who felt like they were becoming one. I have to say, how quickly Eunhyuk said his heart was Donghae's surprised me quite a bit. Probably because I've focused too much on what Donghae was feeling, that I forgot that to consider Eunhyuk's feelings and his trust towards Donghae.
Wish I could write a better comment than this pathetic one but real life calls. Time contraints. Gets in the way so much.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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I totally got emotional writing that scene because all of their love and fear was just pouring out of me. it was pretty hard.
well, keep in mind that while Donghae may have been an Ipsuren for a year now, Hyuk has been one for 51 years. Which is way more than double the length of time he spent as a human. So he's probably pretty preconditioned to think negatively about a race he's been detached from for so long.
I'm happy Sungmin is back too! and no, a couple people said that the first kyumin interaction was cute ^^
I want to say more in response to the other things you mentioned, but I don't want to give away too much!
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I'll talk to you later this week ♥
(lol i responded with my personal LJ at first~ oops)
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