Re: SPOT?whisper_wispFebruary 4 2012, 07:36:12 UTC
LOL well if you're still awake then O________O I'm awake at the same time haha.
oh...I feel kinda sad that Donghae is off moving towards higher places while Hyukjae was "travelling to a city he could never reach" T_____T it sounds tragic and foreboding already! "Hae’s smile felt soft on his face, a slight upward pull at the corners of his mouth."--> >:||| the source of all my feels and flails towards this fishy face DDDx
;~~; the relationship between eunhyuk and donghae so far aughhlaksdjfsaiekdfjls the making out is hot and eeep hopefully Eunhyuk will trust Donghae enough to open up to him about his past more.
Ohhh and again, I love how you painted this new world, how different it is from where Donghae and Eunhyuk come from, about the Cronian's intense love for luxuries and use of Ipsuren slaves...YeYe's AWESOME house hell yeah
YEWOOK! ;AA;
OMG YESUNGGG aw gosh he's so in character (his philtrum rubbing I JUST CAN'T, except you describe it with much better words.. "cupid's bow" xD)
" the taste of sex and desire popping like hot oil between them" OKAY WELL LET ME JUST THROW A TABLE HERE
oh no oh no oh noesss /o\\\ oh gosh you just totally flipped the tables over and that was really unexpected. D: Yesung testing Donghae...hmmm :TT "" “But nothing happened!” Yesung looked at him, pointedly. “That you remember.” Hae shivered. Shisus. ""
okay but AWESOME! Donghae is gonna get more powerful under Yesung's guidance wooohoooooo
/okay must go to sleep noowwww //
PS: MY NAME IS DONGHAE. LET'S PARTY TOGETHER! those were EXACTLY my thoughts too OTL
tragic and foreboding is what i do, man. all great works of fiction are tragic and foreboding pffft
eunhae are crazy in this fic i swear i don't script their conversations ahead of time. i just kind of go into it with a few topics i want them to hit on and a couple things they need to bring up, then let them do the rest as i write. and it comes out like...that.
yeah i'm a sucker for old persian/indonesian culture. when i move out i will live in a house with this architecture and have bellydancers in henna and piercings serve me spiced wine and i will pay them too much for it because i will be rich from all the books i'll have published. yeah right.
Yesung was fun to write. Like, I knew he would be but he was really fun to write.
/THROWS TABLE WITH YOU
mwahahahaha /rubs hands together i like it when i throw curveballs at my readers it's fun because they don't expect it and i'm meen.
also yeye wtf is wrong with you you can't just do shit to people in their sleep omg.
oh...I feel kinda sad that Donghae is off moving towards higher places while Hyukjae was "travelling to a city he could never reach" T_____T
it sounds tragic and foreboding already!
"Hae’s smile felt soft on his face, a slight upward pull at the corners of his mouth."--> >:||| the source of all my feels and flails towards this fishy face DDDx
;~~; the relationship between eunhyuk and donghae so far aughhlaksdjfsaiekdfjls the making out is hot and eeep hopefully Eunhyuk will trust Donghae enough to open up to him about his past more.
Ohhh and again, I love how you painted this new world, how different it is from where Donghae and Eunhyuk come from, about the Cronian's intense love for luxuries and use of Ipsuren slaves...YeYe's AWESOME house hell yeah
YEWOOK! ;AA;
OMG YESUNGGG aw gosh he's so in character (his philtrum rubbing I JUST CAN'T, except you describe it with much better words.. "cupid's bow" xD)
" the taste of sex and desire popping like hot oil between them" OKAY WELL LET ME JUST THROW A TABLE HERE
oh no oh no oh noesss /o\\\ oh gosh you just totally flipped the tables over and that was really unexpected. D: Yesung testing Donghae...hmmm :TT
""
“But nothing happened!”
Yesung looked at him, pointedly. “That you remember.”
Hae shivered. Shisus.
""
okay but AWESOME! Donghae is gonna get more powerful under Yesung's guidance wooohoooooo
/okay must go to sleep noowwww //
PS:
MY NAME IS DONGHAE. LET'S PARTY TOGETHER!
those were EXACTLY my thoughts too OTL
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eunhae are crazy in this fic i swear i don't script their conversations ahead of time. i just kind of go into it with a few topics i want them to hit on and a couple things they need to bring up, then let them do the rest as i write. and it comes out like...that.
yeah i'm a sucker for old persian/indonesian culture. when i move out i will live in a house with this architecture and have bellydancers in henna and piercings serve me spiced wine and i will pay them too much for it because i will be rich from all the books i'll have published.
yeah right.
Yesung was fun to write. Like, I knew he would be but he was really fun to write.
/THROWS TABLE WITH YOU
mwahahahaha /rubs hands together
i like it when i throw curveballs at my readers it's fun because they don't expect it and i'm meen.
also yeye wtf is wrong with you you can't just do shit to people in their sleep omg.
*3*)~
/confetti
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