First and foremost, lemme spazz that you updated. *squeeeeeeee*
Oke, now thats done...
Your descriptions are sooooo... you my dear awesome author, need to teach me *nodnod*
Colors. All the colors of the world merging and dancing and becoming one. They warped and bulged and stretched themselves across his vision, laying upon his mind like a soft, light blanket.
That's just a beautiful thing to visualise (but then knowing me, I'll probably go crosseyed or something XD)
Sungmin and pink never fail to amuse me X)
When he woke up he was surrounded by pink. A bed half the size of Eunhyuk’s, with pink sheets, pink pillow cases, pink walls, pink curtains, and on the floor, various rugs in different shades of pink overlapping each other.
The transformation sounds so... scary, yet mysterious and really painful. I love the way you describe the final stage of the process where 'the shell of his cracked humanity had peeled away', that just sounds so... the way you worded it, sounds so perfect... and then there's me thinking (Donghae is a beasty Ipsuren now hell yeahhh! Now what will Hyuk do??)
Caring Min is cuuuutee <33 Always being there for the baby (well nt so baby now) Fishy <3
“And what happened to Eunhyuk?” Donghae managed to ask, his voice held tight in his throat.
Silence once more, before,
“Unspeakable things. You must never ask him, Donghae. He wouldn’t want you to know.”
Hmmm... I wonder what happened?? Will you tell us eventually or will it remain a mystery forever? XD (whyy, do I sound so formal...)
Humourously, Siwon raised his eyebrows to an almost comical height
hehehehe shi-brows are in action XD I love how you portray Siwon here (kinda liking him these days cos' of Skip Beat! XD)
Whatever you feel towards this person, whatever you may feel for anyone else at any point in your existence, it is not love. That is the most important thing I can teach you, Donghae, that Ipsuren cannot feel love.
I'll remember this... so wait, Eunhae... are they really in love? Or are they just you know... being Ipsuren XD
“Actually,” Eunhyuk grunted. “I’m trying to control myself right now. It’s kind of hard when you look like that.”
If I were you Hyukkie, I'd jump him from the moment I see him ^^ I'm sure no-one and I mean NOONE, can resist sexy Ipsuren Donghae... I doubt Hyuk can either XD
Deeply, the okji inhaled. “Even then, I knew you were everything I’d ever wanted in a companion.”i>
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet Hyukkie!! <3
“Donghae,” he moaned it, almost whimpered.
The smut. Holy-wow, the smut. My face the entire time O___________O Lemme just say that 'them' glowing mad me giggle XDD I mean, they're GOLD O___o
And the ending, is WOW, 'and DOnghae came' XDD... okee, so you gotta update soon XD Andd I'll start on Chap6 poster kkk
teach...you? LOL i could definitely give you a few pointers. i'm really good at telling people what not to do ;3 as for what to do, i can tell you a few tips and tricks, but i think descriptive writing is something just comes from the soul. you either have it or you don't. but if you do have it, you have to know how to utilize that talent effectively. this part takes practice. a lot of practice. i've had a whole lifetime of the stuff.
miniming in this fic is like my new favourite and as for hyukjae's past...what kind of writer would i be if i dropped a bomb like that and didn't elaborate eventually?
but, :V you didn't like siwon before?
and the love subject. probably the most important subject of this entire fanfic.
lol hyuk. he so silly. getting all flustered and shit. no but srsly i'm glad you were satisfied by my porn. that is all.
Hehe but no seriously the way you write is great =DD Im curious about Hyuk's past now ^^
And Siwon... It's not that I dont like him, just that I didnt really pay that much attention to him before, compared to members like EunHae and Kyumin XD But hey, this fic and his dramas will eventually change that...
Love. I'll keep that in mind, cos' it sorts of change my perspective of how EunHAe will work out... whether their 'love' is true or not... wait are they even in love? anyway, considering Ipsuren cant love, Im worried Donghae will fall too quickly or something and completely forget what Siwon said and... yhh XD
And I love the way you describe Hyuk... how he's so cold at the beginning towards Hae, then there's a hidden feeling and then he loses control lol
And porn, I rarely read them so I cant exactly judge XD I think you did a pretty good job ^^
thank you sweetheart ♥ who isn't curious about hyuk's past now? i know i am. i wonder what happened? who knows. i don't know. nope.
siwon is hilarious XD although tbh i can't even with skip beat seriously sho (or lol should i call him shang) just makes my brain die whenever i see him so when i watch that drama i'm legit just sitting and staring and drooling, waiting for the sexiest man alive to come explode more of my braincells.
are they in love? are they in love. good question. mmm brainfood
omgsh thank god i'm glad someone finally said they like the way i wrote hyuk in this chapter i was worried
good. you shouldn't read them. you're too young ♥ I MEAN. yay i'm glad you liked it ^^;
your welcome ♥ hehe even the author dont know, hyuk's so mysterious D
Yushh, yushh, Sho... that hair, those eyes.. do you know how many times I had to pause and reqind just to see him do those gestures, I dont even know what the heck those are but its so cute XD
and siwon is just plain awesome XD
yeahhh, are they in love? hmmmm...
Yeah, Hyuk here is perfect, I mean their relationship development is what I love, how his hate, or fake hate(?) turned to... um, lust? I dunno, either way I love it!
and yes, i am too young but who can resist EunHae and your writing <3
what do i think? tell you what i think? i think you are the greatest thing that has ever happened to this fanfic please stay with me forever thank you.
also, IF ANY OF YOU GUYS ARE READING THIS and you have a tumblr, shamelessly reblog that shit like you dgaf.
thank you sooo much! im glad you liked it =D its the first time ive done photosets and i didnt know how to go about making it XD im really glad you liked it =") (and i ddnt delete anything... i think its screened or something, at least thats what the popup thing said XD)
*squeeeeeeee*
Oke, now thats done...
Your descriptions are sooooo... you my dear awesome author, need to teach me *nodnod*
Colors. All the colors of the world merging and dancing and becoming one. They warped and bulged and stretched themselves across his vision, laying upon his mind like a soft, light blanket.
That's just a beautiful thing to visualise (but then knowing me, I'll probably go crosseyed or something XD)
Sungmin and pink never fail to amuse me X)
When he woke up he was surrounded by pink. A bed half the size of Eunhyuk’s, with pink sheets, pink pillow cases, pink walls, pink curtains, and on the floor, various rugs in different shades of pink overlapping each other.
The transformation sounds so... scary, yet mysterious and really painful. I love the way you describe the final stage of the process where 'the shell of his cracked humanity had peeled away', that just sounds so... the way you worded it, sounds so perfect... and then there's me thinking (Donghae is a beasty Ipsuren now hell yeahhh! Now what will Hyuk do??)
Caring Min is cuuuutee <33 Always being there for the baby (well nt so baby now) Fishy <3
“And what happened to Eunhyuk?” Donghae managed to ask, his voice held tight in his throat.
Silence once more, before,
“Unspeakable things. You must never ask him, Donghae. He wouldn’t want you to know.”
Hmmm... I wonder what happened?? Will you tell us eventually or will it remain a mystery forever? XD (whyy, do I sound so formal...)
Humourously, Siwon raised his eyebrows to an almost comical height
hehehehe shi-brows are in action XD I love how you portray Siwon here (kinda liking him these days cos' of Skip Beat! XD)
Whatever you feel towards this person, whatever you may feel for anyone else at any point in your existence, it is not love. That is the most important thing I can teach you, Donghae, that Ipsuren cannot feel love.
I'll remember this... so wait, Eunhae... are they really in love? Or are they just you know... being Ipsuren XD
“Actually,” Eunhyuk grunted. “I’m trying to control myself right now. It’s kind of hard when you look like that.”
If I were you Hyukkie, I'd jump him from the moment I see him ^^ I'm sure no-one and I mean NOONE, can resist sexy Ipsuren Donghae... I doubt Hyuk can either XD
Deeply, the okji inhaled. “Even then, I knew you were everything I’d ever wanted in a companion.”i>
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet Hyukkie!! <3
“Donghae,” he moaned it, almost whimpered.
The smut. Holy-wow, the smut.
My face the entire time O___________O
Lemme just say that 'them' glowing mad me giggle XDD I mean, they're GOLD O___o
And the ending, is WOW, 'and DOnghae came' XDD... okee, so you gotta update soon XD
Andd I'll start on Chap6 poster kkk
(longest comment Ive ever written on LJ O__O)
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as for what to do, i can tell you a few tips and tricks, but i think descriptive writing is something just comes from the soul. you either have it or you don't. but if you do have it, you have to know how to utilize that talent effectively. this part takes practice. a lot of practice. i've had a whole lifetime of the stuff.
miniming in this fic is like my new favourite
and as for hyukjae's past...what kind of writer would i be if i dropped a bomb like that and didn't elaborate eventually?
but, :V
you didn't like siwon before?
and the love subject. probably the most important subject of this entire fanfic.
lol hyuk. he so silly. getting all flustered and shit.
no but srsly i'm glad you were satisfied by my porn. that is all.
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Im curious about Hyuk's past now ^^
And Siwon... It's not that I dont like him, just that I didnt really pay that much attention to him before, compared to members like EunHae and Kyumin XD But hey, this fic and his dramas will eventually change that...
Love. I'll keep that in mind, cos' it sorts of change my perspective of how EunHAe will work out... whether their 'love' is true or not... wait are they even in love? anyway, considering Ipsuren cant love, Im worried Donghae will fall too quickly or something and completely forget what Siwon said and... yhh XD
And I love the way you describe Hyuk... how he's so cold at the beginning towards Hae, then there's a hidden feeling and then he loses control lol
And porn, I rarely read them so I cant exactly judge XD I think you did a pretty good job ^^
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who isn't curious about hyuk's past now? i know i am. i wonder what happened? who knows. i don't know. nope.
siwon is hilarious XD
although tbh i can't even with skip beat seriously sho (or lol should i call him shang) just makes my brain die whenever i see him so when i watch that drama i'm legit just sitting and staring and drooling, waiting for the sexiest man alive to come explode more of my braincells.
are they in love? are they in love. good question.
mmm brainfood
omgsh thank god i'm glad someone finally said they like the way i wrote hyuk in this chapter i was worried
good. you shouldn't read them. you're too young ♥ I MEAN. yay i'm glad you liked it ^^;
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hehe even the author dont know, hyuk's so mysterious D
Yushh, yushh, Sho... that hair, those eyes.. do you know how many times I had to pause and reqind just to see him do those gestures, I dont even know what the heck those are but its so cute XD
and siwon is just plain awesome XD
yeahhh, are they in love? hmmmm...
Yeah, Hyuk here is perfect, I mean their relationship development is what I love, how his hate, or fake hate(?) turned to... um, lust? I dunno, either way I love it!
and yes, i am too young but who can resist EunHae and your writing <3
btw... I tried that photoset thing on tumblr... but, i dunno, tell me what you think?
http://ai-coniq.tumblr.com/post/16177267005/ipsuren-book-one-rise-apocalypse-pairing
(onna go update my reply on the Characters page now XD)
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also, IF ANY OF YOU GUYS ARE READING THIS and you have a tumblr, shamelessly reblog that shit like you dgaf.
seriously thank you i'm going to cry now ;_;
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Im so glad you like it :) Ive never done photosets before and animation was a pain on Photoshop Elements XD
Nuuu, don't cry XD
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its the first time ive done photosets and i didnt know how to go about making it XD im really glad you liked it =")
(and i ddnt delete anything... i think its screened or something, at least thats what the popup thing said XD)
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I didn't do anything o_o
livejournal is trolling us
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and hehe evil lj XD
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