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ipsuren

Rise Apocalypse: Chapter 12

Mar 26, 2012 23:49

( “You’re completely, totally blind. How can you not see? How can you not feel him?” )

chapter: 12, book: rise apocalypse

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SPOT #3 ipsuren March 27 2012, 04:12:15 UTC

noondaynoona

Re: SPOT #3 noondaynoona March 29 2012, 14:52:49 UTC

Okay, I'm in class right now and of course I have one million things to say about EVERYTHING since this was a fantastic update and you are a perfect storyteller and I never know what's coming next and I'm in love with your writing and your vision and I'm foaming at the mouth for more; HOWEVER, I can't leave you the comment you deserve right now but I will do it tonight. I'm enthralled by your characterization and all the subtleties that maybe only exist in my mind and I promise that you will hear from me again in less that 12 hours. Ugh! You're too good. I have to go now but I just want to gush about all of this AND I CAN'T WHY IS THIS WORLD SO CRUEL?! (The interrobang is completely necessary).

Also, check me out! I got a VIP spot and I didn't even ask for it! Hopefully my long comment will disappear behind this teensy one and I won't look so silly when I switch on serial-commenter mode haha.

Re: SPOT #3 ipsuren March 29 2012, 22:33:10 UTC

omg i'm so excited for your comment i can't even wait you have no idea

/tail wag

Re: SPOT #3 noondaynoona March 30 2012, 23:22:55 UTC

Okay, so I’m at work right now and I’m hoping my boss doesn’t walk in on me as I write this since I would definitely get in trouble but, fuck it, I’m risking it. This comment has taken way too long to birth! I really want to comment on this chapter before your mystery fic is released tonight (even though I definitely already know what it is) and since talking to you today has confirmed some things that I’d only been guessing at, I’m really excited to guess at some more shit ( ... )

Re: SPOT #3 noondaynoona March 30 2012, 23:24:15 UTC

Even though I know this won’t happen…this is what I want to happen: Siwon shot Donghae. Eunhyuk sobs helplessly over his lover’s dead body. Siwon emerges from the shadows, does something dramatic like pisses on Hyuk’s face or something and cuts him a check for a cool grand then disappears. I want Siwon to revive Hae, take him under his wing. I want Siwon to brainwash Hae until he is slightly evil and super-duper strong. I want Siwon to bring Donghae to the darkside and ALL THE WHILE Eunhyuk gets his shit together. I want Eunhyuk to train like a motherfucker and finally, after a lot of hard work (I might respect his character more then) he gets to the same level as Donghae, I want him to show up and bring Donghae back to his senses, show him what he’s missing out on, show Donghae how strong he is, that he can protect him better now, give him some tough love but also I want it to be pretty gushy too, I want Hyuk to make him fall in love all over again and they can defeat Siwon together (with the help of Kyuhyun and Sungmin since this ( ... )

Re: SPOT #3 noondaynoona March 30 2012, 23:26:44 UTC

Seeing that Leeteuk loves Kangin just as much as Donghae loves Eunhyuk made my heart break for Leeteuk. He’s in a horrible position and he’ll stay there just because Kangin is there. It’s awful. I like how easily Leeteuk could admit that it was love though. I like that he made it a simple thing for Donghae to accept instead of deepening Hae’s worries. I’m glad that they had their moment together because Leeteuk isn’t a bad guy and Donghae needed to set himself straight and go after Eunhyuk and I’m just really happy that Hae had his epiphany before Siwon kidnapped him or whatever it is Siwon is doing with him ( ... )

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