I know <3 You commented on chapter 1, thank you for that, really. I was really cranky yesterday when I was posting this and I just needed to get that feeling out of my chest.
For me the idea is the most important when it comes to fanfictions. But I totally understand why would the ending be disappointing for you. Was for me as well, actually. But I just couldn't think of any better way how to keep this "feeling real". I also get that it might comes across as rushed, I might should make it one whole long story instead of parting it to three chapters. The future images should quickly take you through the lives they developed. I made it "rushed" on purpose. What they had was something like grounding constant in their past lives. When you loose grounding, things are ought to become chaotic, rushed and busy. Does it makes sense? It should make their past relationship feel even more important. The key part, they literally decided to "lock the door" behind their past relationship. But tipsy stag-night overwhelmed Sunggyu sent a message that he will keep the key from that "closed door", if they even needed each other again after all.
I didn't write this for myself, that's the thing :) I have this playing in my mind comfortably as movie and I put myself through the hell of challenging my English skills only because I want to share my thoughts with others, of course :) Why would I put myself through something like this if I can just "watch" my mind ^^ I write my stories with my thoughts about the guys that I think are real. I of course add some yaoi and physical to it for sake of make it a "fanfiction story" or more exciting, but the interactions, characters and that things is something I really really think about and think might be real when it comes to the boys. And I just always hope people who think the same come and tell me "wow! I think this really works!" or..." that's how I see these two as well!" or ask where am I coming from thinking that these two have this and this dynamics etc.
Thank you for commenting btw. I'm glad you enjoyed it at least to some extent :)
For me the idea is the most important when it comes to fanfictions. But I totally understand why would the ending be disappointing for you. Was for me as well, actually. But I just couldn't think of any better way how to keep this "feeling real". I also get that it might comes across as rushed, I might should make it one whole long story instead of parting it to three chapters. The future images should quickly take you through the lives they developed. I made it "rushed" on purpose. What they had was something like grounding constant in their past lives. When you loose grounding, things are ought to become chaotic, rushed and busy. Does it makes sense? It should make their past relationship feel even more important. The key part, they literally decided to "lock the door" behind their past relationship. But tipsy stag-night overwhelmed Sunggyu sent a message that he will keep the key from that "closed door", if they even needed each other again after all.
I didn't write this for myself, that's the thing :) I have this playing in my mind comfortably as movie and I put myself through the hell of challenging my English skills only because I want to share my thoughts with others, of course :) Why would I put myself through something like this if I can just "watch" my mind ^^ I write my stories with my thoughts about the guys that I think are real. I of course add some yaoi and physical to it for sake of make it a "fanfiction story" or more exciting, but the interactions, characters and that things is something I really really think about and think might be real when it comes to the boys. And I just always hope people who think the same come and tell me "wow! I think this really works!" or..." that's how I see these two as well!" or ask where am I coming from thinking that these two have this and this dynamics etc.
Thank you for commenting btw. I'm glad you enjoyed it at least to some extent :)
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