The Other Side (HP)

Aug 25, 2008 16:42

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing(s): Harry/Ginny
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Notes: For this week's drabble challenge over at hpgw100, 'Diagon Alley'.

Sorry for any small typos or errors; I am using a French keyboard. Also, my use of English this week has been minimal, so I hope this turned out ok!

The Other Side )

drabble, rating: pg, harry potter, het, hg

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josawyer August 25 2008, 17:46:28 UTC
Nicely done. Very grin-inducing, and I think that the vagueness of the ending is a good thing and not just an artifact of the 100 word limit. I had always heard "bachelor party" rather than "stag party" but that might be an Americanism.

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iphifix August 25 2008, 18:21:38 UTC
It was a bit of both, actually. The original drabble was 128, so I had to down-size.

And I believe that 'bachelor party' is an Americanism, as I know for sure that the British female version is a 'hen party' and not a 'bachelorette party' but I suppose a Google search can confirm this.

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josawyer August 25 2008, 20:03:00 UTC
Indeed, Wikipedia confirms that the brit term is "stag party" and that "bachelor party" is used only in the US and South Africa. So, my Yankee is showing.

And I really like how it turned out -- I didn't mean by my comment to imply that it needed more words, only that I really enjoyed the finished product.

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iphifix August 25 2008, 20:48:55 UTC
Oh yes, I took it to be a nice comment. Sorry, I'm in France right now and have been speaking French all week with my family, so maybe my ability to express myself in English has just escaped me today.

Perhaps once day I will write an expanded version of Harry's stag party. I just tend not to do well with longer fics. :(

(and as a side note I love your drabbles and look forward to them every week. Do you mind if I friend you? Is this your fic journal/do you post fic in this journal?)

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josawyer August 25 2008, 21:26:44 UTC
I would be proud for you to friend me! I post fics to this journal, when I write fics. Mostly I write original stuff, which is on a blog.

I used to be terrible at short fics (for years I could only write mammoth 50,000+ word epics) but I've gotten better with practice! I look forward to reading more about Harry's stag party!

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