Under the Lights of Sin City [3/3]

Jul 25, 2010 16:16

Title: Under the Lights of Sin City [3/3]
Author: ipanicdaily
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon, Jon/Spencer, tons more
POV: 3rd; Ryan-centric.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If I owned anyone in this story [beside Mia and Kade], do you honestly think I'd be writing it? No, I'd be out making it happen. :]
Summary: There were some really great pictures of all kinds of things ( Read more... )

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slywolf9 July 26 2010, 13:59:42 UTC
Ugh, so my sister closed my previous comment before I could send it, so here I go again..!

OMGG OMGG OMGG.

For one, I am so so glad they got some action in before the end, because I was totally feeling sorry for Bden and Ryan's sex life. :] And it was sweet, in the only way rough, passionate sex can be, I guess...!!

I'm also really glad that they are going to adopt Mia. I think that'll be really great for them, and I love how it finally made Ryan feel like he had a future. That was so so sweet and nice and wonderful when you were describing how he felt!

I'm also really glad we got to see a softer, more vulnerable side of Spencer, because so much of him was just bitchy and angry, so it was refreshing to see just how much he cared about Ryan, and vice versa.

And then OHMYGOOOOODDDD. Brendon proposed to Ryan! Oh that was so so so wonderful, oh my gosh, I totally flipped out. That made me so very happy :] I couldn't stop smiling!

I just think you tied everything up very nicely. It was really great to not have loose ends. I'm so a lot glad you finished this story, I love it and I know I will definitely be rereading this in the future! <333

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ipanicdaily July 26 2010, 14:32:27 UTC
Awwww. Well. EPIC COMMENT. TAKE TWO. xD

Yeahh...I totally did not want to write it. You can tell that by how shitty its written. But I was like "It's rated NC-17, I've only done one shitty bj..." and suffered through it. It literally took like 4 days to write just that xD

My next story will be sexless >>

Ryan's got some mental/emotional issues. So being included in future plans was really good for him.

Spencer has always 'taken care of' Ryan, but he needs Ryan pretty much as much as Ryan needs him. So being without him for a year... that made a sad Spenny xD

The proposal was ridiculously cheesy and sappy xD

Well unlike other authors, even when I leave LJ, I don't plan on deleting my journal. It can just get lost in oblivion. I'm not ashamed of what I write. 'cause I know its frustrating as hell to go to read something again that you loved only to find the person deleted their journal so it's gone >>

And I save stories to micro word now 'cause of that, but there are some I didn't do that with quick enough D:

anyway. Hope to have something else up soon :]

Thanks for always reading/commenting <3

xoxo Tabi

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