Two Weeks In Hawaii [14/14 + Epilogue]

Jun 19, 2010 14:49

Title: Two Weeks In Hawaii [14/14 + Epilogue]
Author: ipanicdaily
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon, Spencer/Jon, Ryan/Pete (past), Gabe/Will, Nate/Alex
POV: 3rd; Ryan-centric.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own anyone/anything other than the plot. The title belongs to the band Hellogoodbye.
Summary: Sometimes, no matter how much it’s meant to be, it can’t.
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slywolf9 June 19 2010, 23:25:28 UTC
I think I had a heart attack when I saw this posted. Like my heart freaked out completely.

OH GABRIEL! And William. I am so sad. I really wanted them together, and I understand William's reasoning, and totally applaud his rationality in such a situation but I can't help but bemoan the fact that...well dammit!! I want them together and I am so sad and hurting for Gabe, even though he deserves it but BOO!! I'll get over it...sigh. It's just so heart breaking, thinking back to earlier chapters and how damn happy they were together...I mean, Gabe came to Hawaii for Will...

OH BRENDON!! Brenny Bear ugh <3 I wuvs him. I am so sad and sad and just SAD! Practically inconsolable. :[ I also understand but am upset along with Ryan, because yeah, he can't just...you know, throw everything away...right now. He needs to get his stuff together and THEN PLEASE GO BACK TO BDEN!

Brendon giving the necklace was so sweet. I was getting mad at Ryan for being all "Oh we'll move on, Brendon will move on and be happy and blah blah blah" like they didn't really love each other, puhlease. So thank you Brendon for being so superfuckingawesome.

That was a mean cliffie at the end... D: I am sad. I was all teary eyed. And still thinking about the title...Sigh.

OH! I didn't review the last chapter, but I wanted to mention that I LOVED that Shane came in. That was perfect. Like PERFECT. :]]]

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ipanicdaily June 20 2010, 01:45:45 UTC
I was so anxious; I stayed up most of the night to finish it then frantically searched for someone to beta it just to get it up xD

I hurt for Gabe too. That part had me in tears as I wrote it. I was like "I DON'T WANNA!" but knew it had to be done. Bill had to do what's best for him and right now, Gabe's not good for him :/

Ryan and Brendon both have a lot to consider, but neither want to give each other up either...

From the moment I stuck the necklace on Brendon, I knew in this chapter he would give it to Ryan :]

I adore cliffhangers xD

Shane ftw!

Thanks much! :3

xoxo Tabi

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