CHAPTER THIRTY FIVE

[invisibletosee]

Harry squeezed him tightly and Draco winced in his arms.

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Imperius/Cruciatus

[xlove]

First off, let me tell you that I absolutely adore this story. I'm having difficulty stopping in order to get on with certain responsibilities, all of which seem unimportant in comparison.

I just wanted to make a comment on your usage of the Imperius and Cruciatus curses. If I recall correctly, the words to cast the curses are different from the name of the curses themselves. So far, you have used Crucio as both the word and the name of Cruciatus. Also, when Harry casts Imperius, he should be saying 'Imperio', not 'Imperius'.

Otherwise, fantastic story.

Re: Imperius/Cruciatus

[invisibletosee]

Oh BLESS you for that. Yes, you're right. I'll go poke the text with a stick.

Re: Imperius/Cruciatus

[anna_blue]

While you're poking, I might point out that when spells are spoke in canon, they are italicised. I'm not sure why this is, but there you have it.

Lovely, lovely fic. Fabulous burglar alarms.

"I'm not a complete idiot, you know."

"Which part is missing?" Draco asked. He was, Harry could see, doing his damnedest to be his usual self.

"My patience," snapped Harry.

And the above has to be my favorite part about this chapter.

Re: Imperius/Cruciatus

[invisibletosee]

Do you know, I'd absolutely not registered that spells were usually written in italics. Hmm. Will try to sort that out too.

Speaking of curses...

[ipomoeaborealis]

When Draco meets the Boggart, shouldn't it be 'Riddikulus'?
Other than that, I absolutely adore your story. It is so wonderful on so many levels that it leaves me quite speechless. And glued to my computer. Um. I try to be more coherent at another time.

Re: Speaking of curses...

[invisibletosee]

Cheers, pet. I guess I need to correct the text here in LJ now, in addition to the word document on my hard drive. This will, of course, make all the comments seem rather random, but what the heck.

Glad you're enjoying it!