Comments | invisibletosee: CHAPTER THIRTY EIGHT

invisibletosee

CHAPTER THIRTY EIGHT

Dec 29, 2003 20:14

Professor Snape was standing in precisely the same spot he had occupied the last time that Draco awoke in the Infirmary.( Read more... )

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tayefeth December 31 2003, 03:24:31 UTC

"Strange, but delicious."

Not a bad description of the speaker, either...

evester January 20 2004, 05:37:04 UTC

i agree whole heartedly.

not_vacillating December 31 2003, 20:32:13 UTC

How can I comment on a chapter so perfect? Beyond "Draco! Snape! Neville! Draco!", there's... it's perfect. I love it.

hedda62 December 31 2003, 21:20:40 UTC

A synaesthetic potion! Hee. Lovely.

Am enjoying this so much I haven't stopped to comment. Will put all the gurgles of delight after the last chapter.

quinconcinnity January 1 2004, 06:27:55 UTC

"Well done you, Neville
Odd sentence..the 'you' bugs me.

Wonderful chapter though. I about died laughing when Snape threatened to poison the soup ^_^

apel January 3 2004, 14:38:32 UTC

He made it look like they were letters to Muggle friends, but in fact they were going to a post office box which was enchanted to work as a portkey on the inside, and so all his letters were being whisked off to Voldemort via the Royal Mail."
The name of the company is Royal Mail, without article. Saying "the Royal Mail" is like saying "the Ikea" or "the Starbucks." I should know, I work for them. :-)

invisibletosee January 3 2004, 23:40:27 UTC

I wouldn't quibble with you as to the correct name of the company; nevertheless, in common parlance people do use the article.