aroma -- chapter 06

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Aroma
Chapters: 06/07
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Malexmale sex, abuse, character death, violence, murder, fluff
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto, Saga/Shou
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money, unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “I can’t sleep in our bed. I can’t step into the shower. I can’t eat

Comments

[bellcheria]

I just read it and my
fucking
holy
jezus
fucking
GOD
THAT END!!!
*totally captivated by it*

Okay lemme try again...

The loss of Tora tears my heart apart. I really feel cold inside when reading his parts...

Shou is so sweet and Saga too is a very caring man. Its sweet to know that they both visit the grave and do visit Tora to keep him alive.

Thats all I can say about your beautiful writing, I mean...That end. Its all I waited for. Blood I wanted and blood I got. Holy crap i loved it...I could really feel and also BE the hate and malice Tora felt and was at that moment. To have everything breaking lose, letting the animal inside you go and go and go till nothing is left...

And it needed three police men, yes indeed. Of course I am a little scared for Tora and for what will happen now, but no one can blame him. Seriously, this is justice.

Thanks for writing this sweety, its been sososo worth the wait.

[invisiblehabits]

I am glad you liked it! I sort of snickered when you said you wanted blood, because I knew already then that this would happen. I knew that Tora would get blood on his hands as well, even if he didn't go seek it out like you suggested he would. And, just like you say, everything just broke lose when he realised who it was he had before him -- Hiroto's killer! All that darkness, all that danger that he felt but didn't know the meaning of for years welled forth and just.... Yeah, this is the result. The three police men were my attempt to say that for one thing Tora is a rather large man compared to most Japanese men, but now he was also going berserk and being livid. It seems it made sense, I hope it did

[bellcheria]

*kicks Kenzo and Aki into a love hotel and have you banned from said hotel so you won't peek*

There there ùu

Oh it wasn't rushed at all OAO It was pretty adreline filled and I liikkeeeddd it~

Pwah, it was his dark side luring him to the dark place ùu His dark sub-conscious was kicking in, I say.

<3

[invisiblehabits]

O__O

And just how, if I may ask, were you planning on keeping me (and a bunch of other girls whom I shall leave unnamed but they know who they are) out of that room?!

I'm glad you liked the ending, I was worried about it but now I'm feeling more confident. And I did say Tora's darkness would play a part, did I not? ;)

[roses_areblue]

Thanks for the update. So, the next one will be the last chapter? I hope Tora is ok.

[invisiblehabits]

You are most welcome! I'm sorry it took forever and a decade to get this chapter up, Aki and Kenzo got in the way and refused to leave me alone. *pouts*

Yes, the next chapter will be the last one. I hope I can wrap it all up prettily, though I doubt there will be much of a bow to go with it... Tora....well, I'm writing chapter seven right now so hopefully you'll see what happens to him soon! Thank you for reading and commenting!

[rave_andou]

waaa I just read all the chapters in one go......

You actually had me crying at points it was just so sad T___T Pon....... This has to be one of the best fics I have ever read. I know I jumped on board a little late but I really can't wait until the next chapter.

(I'm gonna friend you so I don't loose your username! i hope you don't mind!)

[invisiblehabits]

Haha, sorry about that comment reply earlier! It was me, just logged on to another person's account and then I couldn't log off from hers and yeah...

I still say you can do just about anything you want after tossing out those wonderful compliments! I will friend you back in just a moment, promises! And I'm sorry about being so mean to the boys, I do love them -- honestly!

Chapter seven is being written right now, with a little bit of luck i can type some on it tonight. I hope you'll like the ending, which I for the record is really nervous about writing up. Haha. But yes, you shouldn't have to wait too long! I don't hope...

[rave_andou]

haa haa thats fine XD! I didn't actually notice >>

Aww they are deserved really XD! I will keep an eye out over the next few days in hope then XD!! <3

[invisiblehabits]

Aaaw, thank you! <3

[velvet_liquor]

Nonononooo! Tora, why did you...? é.è and now what will he do? Rot in prison for the rest of his life? But on the other hand, I can understand... He had the one who abused his lover right in front of him, but still... This gonna be hard on Shou... é.è

[invisiblehabits]

I know, I know -- I am a horrible, horrible being!! I can definitely understand Tora as well. If my lover got killed and I was faced with the same situation as Tora was, then I think I might have acted in the exact same way. It's just not something you can overlook, or so I imagine. You would want revenge and there the opportunity is offered on a silver platter.

I'm glad so many people are concerned about Shou! He was supposed to just be a minor character, but he grew on me and it seems he grew on others as well. That makes me happy. I like him and he will need the support now for sure! :(