Moss on Stone -- chapter 01

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Moss on Stone
Chapter: 01/05
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: tingedwords
Genre: Angst/Light romance
Rating: R
Warnings: Implied malexmale sex, suicide attempt, terminal illness, violence, character death
Pairings: Kenzo/Hiroto, Tora/Hirot, Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: A few days later

Comments

[invisiblehabits]

Hahaha, oh yes you DO KNOW! But we'll pretend you don't, no worries. Hehe.

I'm glad you don't think Hiroto's crazy though, cause I don't either. He's just....well he dares to act a little crazy, break the norm, be out of the ordinary, and I kinda like that. And Kenzo... I'm mean to him, I'm very, very mean to him. *sigh*

YOUR BRAIN CAN SOON GO HOME! Hopefully it'll remember to bring you along, or it'll be very troublesome indeed...

<3

[beyondtheremix]

OH HO? 01/05? LOL
DOES THIS MEAN YOU'VE ALREADY FINISHED? hehehe

Well I'm interested to see how things play out, what caused what and who really was at fault if at all.... HMMMM WHY ARE THEY ALL DEAD?! *wails* I'll wait for the next one because right now I've procrastinated on sleeping of all things....... and I haven't written at all like I should have LOL

[invisiblehabits]

*nods* Mhm, oh yes, this one IS finished! I just....need some time to find all my vampiric muses who ran off and hid somewhere, so that I can get back to writing what I SHOULD be writing! Therefore, me being mean and posting slowly. Hehe. But the rest will drop in, don't worry!

And I do that all the time!! Procrastinate sleeping! Or going to sleep at least. It's bad, but....yeah, seriously hard habit to change!

[roses_areblue]

Oh... you kill Tora.

I like this very much. Next chapter please : )

[invisiblehabits]

Yup! Cause I'm mean like that...

Next chapter will be up in a few days or so I'd say. :)

[invisiblehabits]

Insane you are, insane I say! Says the one who just begun re-reading Chained... *points at you* You'll be hearing from me soon....

I agree though, it's kind of hard to not judge him sometimes... He's just....stupid sometimes.

AND I STILL LOVE THAT BLOODY ICON! God, it's killing me!! <3

[suslik_san]

you've put me on war with myself D: I hate this topic mentioned in fiction (unless it's some supernatural action with ghosts and other dead freaks participating) but I just couldn't skip this due to characters and now I don't even know if I want to read the rest. I am curious but it's kinda hard and against my principles

anyway topic aside this is beautifully written. Especially the dialogs, they seem so natural. And I love that there's a reaction in all the right places following some statements.

I don't know what else to say, sorry, my feelings are confused(

[invisiblehabits]

Wow, I feel so honoured you'd give this a chance even though you dislike the topics! It makes me really proud and even more grateful. It is not a light story though, not in any way. Hiroto is bright but tinted in sadness, Kenzo is....dark, to say the least. Read on if you want to, but if it makes you uncomfortable then please step back to save yourself the discomfort.

And thank you! That's just....so kind of you. I don't even know if it's right to say this is dialogue based or not, I never was very good at that kind of analysis, but I do believe the dialogue is very important in this story. They are strangers to each other, so they need to talk and share and get to know. Even when it's immensely difficult to do so.

Thank you so much for giving this a shot. And even more so for sharing your thoughts on it! I hope you stick along for the rest of the ride, but I won't blame you if you don't.