You are writing the Great Anerican Novel. I am not kidding. Your work in this heptad brings together every level and idea of American culture, and tells a unified, tremendous story, which, in spite of being very much about one person, is made out of hundreds of millions of lives and five centuries of history.
This chapter kinda has me in the feels. While im glad to see the Kings again....why couldnt Abraham go and see his ol school chum to see if he had seen or heard about the Kings. The whole muggle side of meteorology in seeing this maelestrom building is interesting, but to me personally, felt a little forced. Not that thats a bad thing, i think the story needed a little break from the norm....i just wish we would have seend this in previous chapters..but that may not seem logical. I have to say that the end of this chapter has me a little lost. Maybe and Epilogue or tiny preview of year 7? Sorry, had to ask Inverarity. 😁😎
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I have to say that the end of this chapter has me a little lost. Maybe and Epilogue or tiny preview of year 7? Sorry, had to ask Inverarity. 😁😎
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