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Here Beneath the Rain

Oct 03, 2008 12:33

Title: Here Beneath the Rain
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: RoyxEd
Author: inugrlrayn
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own FMA or it's characters and all that jazz
Summary: Sex in the rain.

( Your tongue flicks out, tasting the rain on your lips, and I struggle for breath )

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kakeochi October 3 2008, 16:49:45 UTC

Oh. My. God. I'm speechless. That was so beautiful, Ed soaked in the rain, and Roy and... If my brain wasn't completely melted to mush I'd be able to come up with something better than fantastic.

I love how you bring out the stark contrast of the rain and their heat and just the image your words portray... *applauds* I LOVE this. It made my day. :D

If all disasters are this wonderfully hot and soaked in rain, I say we don't have enough disasters. XD

inugrlrayn October 3 2008, 17:00:11 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. sky_dark and I were talking about Amato Discord at Ycon, and it made me want to write smut in the rain.

I agree completely. Lots more disasters like this are in order.

kakeochi October 3 2008, 17:20:57 UTC

Oh, I used to LOVE that doujin. Still do, actually. I actually like most of the FMA doujins by idea. And I'm grateful there are relatively smart doujinkas who draw FMA doujins, ^^;

inugrlrayn October 3 2008, 17:26:27 UTC

well, the dialogue is really weird and wonky, but my god the imagery... *drools*

kakeochi October 3 2008, 17:45:05 UTC

True. You should get someone to draw doujins to your stories instead.

inugrlrayn October 3 2008, 17:45:58 UTC

OMG if only I were that lucky. I think the best I can hope for is bartering fic for art here and there.

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