Song of the Broken Hearted - Part 12

Sep 24, 2008 16:25

Title: Song of the Broken Hearted - Part 12
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: RoyxEd, Alter!RoyxEd
Author: inugrlraynRating: NC-17 (PG-13 for this chapter ( Read more... )

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elfen September 24 2008, 22:03:14 UTC
I really don't envy the position Ed is in. Or Roy for that matter. I appreciated both their honesty, but it still makes me ache. I want to cheer Roy on, to stop waiting and to just go for it with Ed, but at the same time, there's the other Roy and I want him to find the answer to bringing Ed back to Amestris. Ugh. Though I suppose I should compliment you on the ability and talent to have me love both your Roys.

Maybe I'll go read the RoyxRoyxEd fic again and find my happy place. ;D

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inugrlrayn September 24 2008, 22:24:13 UTC
I don't envy any of them. XD Well, thank you! I'm glad alter!Roy is tolerable at the very least, you know? It'd be really sad if everyone hated him.

Hehe, that was way more fun to write than it ought to have been.

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chiisai_neko September 24 2008, 22:32:43 UTC
I usually wait until a story is complete to comment on it, but I have to say, I'm loving this story, so far. I log in hoping for updates.

I have to admit, I wish I could see more of Amestris Roy, because I'm curious to see where it'll go in regards to him.

Have fun at Yaoi Con. I'm so jealous of everyone that's going... only 8 hours away from me, but still so very far from my reach.

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inugrlrayn September 25 2008, 00:06:57 UTC
Well, thank you! I'm glad you like it so much.

The only reason I don't write more of Amestris Roy is because unfortunately, there isn't a whole lot going on in his life except a lot of angsting about. There will be a LOT more of him soon, though. Promise.

Aww, this is the first year I've managed out of the three where I've tried to go. I live across the country, so it's like... an insane trip. Hopefully you'll make it to the next one? :)

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chiisai_neko September 25 2008, 03:13:04 UTC
I plan on going next year... even if for only a day (since I'll be in school). I also plan on dragging my boyfriend along and making him cosplay with me. XD He, of course, doesn't know this yet, but that's not important.... ;-)

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greedy_lover September 24 2008, 23:45:30 UTC
everyone is in a sucky situion. but alter!roy is so sweet... this chapter was so fluffy :D

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inugrlrayn September 25 2008, 00:01:39 UTC
Yeah, they really are. :D I love to write fluff.

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caedi September 24 2008, 23:58:08 UTC
This chapter was very, very sweet. I'm loving this other Roy, and his thoughtfulness, and little insecurities. But yes, (and... I think I say this every time I comment) it does make me ache a little for Amestris Roy, who's still all alone, trying desperately to get Ed back, while Ed is... really, really moving on now. T_T

You really know how to write heartwrenching stories. This is fantastic as usual. And that song was perfect; timing, feeling and everything- it just came to a close when I finished the chapter ^_^

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inugrlrayn September 25 2008, 00:14:51 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, and him. I sort of feel bad for everyone involved... because I'm a jerk and making things difficult for them. XD And yeah, Ed really is moving on now. He's resigned himself to our world, and is learning that it's possible for him to move forward and be happy anyway. Good for him, bad for amestris!Roy.

Aww, well thank you! And I'm glad you liked the song. :)

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inugrlrayn September 25 2008, 00:21:21 UTC
This story is like... my baby currently. I figured it was worth the :F amount of research that goes into it. Nice to know it's appreciated :)

Yeah, it's hard to write, too, because I luff amestris!Roy with much luff.

I live in Indiana. It's across the country for me too... and this is my third attempt. Something goes wrong every year for some reason. :F I shall... bring back lots of pictures?

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inugrlrayn September 25 2008, 00:49:14 UTC
Ooh, I'll keep and eye out and try to get a pic of her if I can for you. :)

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