Comments | inugrlrayn: Gone

inugrlrayn

Gone

Jul 15, 2008 17:01

Title: Gone
Fandom: FMA
Pairing RoyxEd
Author: inugrlrayn
Rating: R... maybe NC-17 if you squint
Prompt: 100moods #22 Crushed
Disclaimer: I don't own FMA or the characters, though I apparently do happily borrow from time to time.

( It was beautiful and exhausting, and he was dying by inches and miles, unable to function without a golden piercing gaze, lips that twisted into a begrudging smile at him now and again. )

Comments 35

greedy_lover July 15 2008, 21:25:46 UTC

this was sad.. roy, leave the military and go after ed!!!!!!!!!

inugrlrayn July 15 2008, 21:43:14 UTC

Indeed!

anat_astarte July 15 2008, 21:41:37 UTC

Ah, the heartache!
Wonderfully done !

inugrlrayn July 15 2008, 21:43:55 UTC

Thanks, deary!

straightcogar July 15 2008, 21:56:34 UTC

I loved the description of Ed's eyes being the color of apple juice.

The angst! It kills! XO!

That was wonderful.

inugrlrayn July 15 2008, 21:58:42 UTC

:D I have a wall scroll with Roy and Ed and Al on it, and happened to be drinking apple juice and they looked awfully similar. Glad it worked out!

Thanks :)

dragonimp July 15 2008, 22:26:43 UTC

You're gonna leave it there? Without ever finding out what Ed's deal was??

inugrlrayn July 15 2008, 22:48:43 UTC

You never know. Maybe Roy never finds out what Ed's deal was. After all, it's not like he can beat it out of him if he can't find him. Buuuuuutttt.... there will probably be at least one more part, because I don't like loose ends.

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inugrlrayn July 16 2008, 02:12:34 UTC

Under most circumstances, I totally agree that that's what'd end up happening. There'll be more eventually. I just have a few other projects to finish first.

Glad you liked it!

elfen July 15 2008, 22:29:26 UTC

*sniffles* Waaaaaa!

I want Roy to go find him. Now. Right this minute!

inugrlrayn July 15 2008, 22:47:34 UTC

:D Well, you know me. I may relent and write more just so I can have a happy ending.

elfen July 15 2008, 22:50:16 UTC

Yes please! Not that I can't appreciate good angst. This was excellent angst, but all those questions left unanswered!

inugrlrayn July 15 2008, 22:52:34 UTC

I hate loose ends, personally. I've got a few story updates to write first, but you can most likely expect another fic to go with this, at the very least, an explanation.

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