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Cloud Nine

Feb 19, 2009 01:19

Title: Cloud Nine
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: RoyxEd
Author: inugrlrayn
Rating: NC-17
Author's Note: I did a meme a little while back offering fic to the first few responders. This would be the Roy/Ed smut amethyst_koneko asked for.
Summary: Ed's having a naughty dream... much to Roy's discomfort.

( Roy tried to reason with him, but had gotten something incoherent in answer, that hadn’t resulted in Ed moving. )

Comments 34

ladyshadowphyre February 19 2009, 06:57:18 UTC

Silly Roy... It's a pity Ed didn't end up mumbling his name in his sleep; that would have made it a lot less difficult for him to hold back like that~

inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 02:37:35 UTC

You know, in the original version, Ed did, but I didn't like it as much. Also, hikaru_9, and her love of angst have rubbed off on me. XD

ladyshadowphyre February 20 2009, 07:54:49 UTC

Like Saru has on me, no doubt. I end up having to write two versions and/or sequels to my fics now to fulfill the need for both angst and happy endings.

inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 14:09:42 UTC

haha, I'm way too lazy for that. If I wrote two versions, I'd never finish anything.

hikaru_9 February 19 2009, 07:11:26 UTC

:D <3

inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 02:37:47 UTC

ladyshadowphyre February 20 2009, 07:56:08 UTC

XD ICON LOVE~!

bloody_winged February 19 2009, 07:16:59 UTC

God, this was just perfect XD""" And it *sooo* screams after a sequel! ^____^ I loved how Roy actually held back until the end - I really would have thought he would have given in. But somehow that makes it even sweeter - seeing that he cares enough for Ed to not use this situation, even if it wasn't intended ^_____^ And Ed... XD" Damn, but I really would like to have him sleeping on me drunk too... *leers* XD"""
This really was a great nightcap ^___^ Thank you! *hugs*

inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 02:39:40 UTC

That would be Roy, doing the right thing when no one is around to call him on it. Glad you liked it, my dear!

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inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 02:42:39 UTC

I'm all about torturing Roy lately. XD It's all good. I've not been writing much lately because I'm working on a book that isn't fanfiction, and my rl posts are usually boring.

Yeah, poor Roy. That would be absolutely miserable, I think.

Off topic, but... are you kissing a giant hershey's kiss in that icon?

claytonsgrrl February 19 2009, 15:47:58 UTC

How did Roy's resolve not melt away during all that?! That's military training for ya.

inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 02:44:07 UTC

Well now when he actually does get Ed, he won't have to feel guilty about that first bit. XD