Practical Application

[inugrlrayn]

Title: Practical Application
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: Ed/Ed
Author: inugrlraynRating: NC-17

Comments

[elfen]

Eds losing their virginity shouldn't be so damn amusing, should it? I couldn't stop giggling. They really are too, too cute. (Just don't tell them I said that, okay?)

[inugrlrayn]

your secret is safe so long as you don't tell them I was laughing most of the time I was writing this. :D

[pink_feet]

Oh my word <3 I love you. Gosh! I love how imperfect it was, it's realistic and so damn entertaining. It just wouldn't be right without their squabbling and oh so tence and awkward moments.

how do you doo itt 8D~

[inugrlrayn]

XD I love this pairing so much because it isn't perfect. It has so much :fail potential when there's no one to offset Edward's...Edness. Hell, the bigger story this comes from, it took almost 40,000 words to get them naked together because they fail that badly. XD

Glad you liked it, deary!

[hikaru_9]

how can the fail smut be so cute
the masturbation was hotter than the sex because they are too damn cute. it fucks with the hot

[inugrlrayn]

Seriously, no one can say I'm in this OTP for the hot smut. At all. I giggled most of the time I was writing. So much for hotness.

[hikaru_9]

XD

[straightcogar]

Loved it! My dear you are the master of EdXEd, they belong to you now.

The are so akward and so very Ed-ish.

[inugrlrayn]

Glad you liked it hon! Haha, Merry Xmas to meeeee!

[th0rns_n_r0ses]

I'm in love with your OTP of :fail. They are too cute for words.