Prov 32 || Shippou

[salomesensei]

Title: How Do You Get Someone to Love You?
Author: Sensei
Words: 450
Rating: T
Characters: Shippou, Inu-tachi, and guest appearance by Toutousai
Summary: Shippou seeks advice on finding love.
Warnings: Toutousai is a dirty old man (but I promise he doesn't touch Shippo and it's truly T-rated).
Author's Note: I am extremely grateful to knittingknots for wisely

Comments

[kiramaru7]

*giggles* Poor Shippou-chan! I hope he's not scarred for life! XD

[salomesensei]

You're a honey. Thanks for reading this. As you know, with such a chibi of a character, this one took serious effort to get to the funny!

[kiramaru7]

*blushes* No you are! You're welcoem! The chibis are hard to make funny, You tend to want go "Awe... how cute!!" with them, ather than see them as comic relief. ;p

You did it though & that's what counts! :D

[salomesensei]

Excellent point. This fic kept heading for fluff. Toutousai helped it stay on track, thanks to KK's idea (which I forgot to credit and am editing in right now!).

[kiramaru7]

Thank you. :D
*nods* I love Toutou-sai! He definitely needs more l;oving & I'm glad he got some from you with this fic and in more ways than one. ;p

DOH! XD it happens...at least you remembered & fixed it. :D