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FIC: Twist

Aug 16, 2004 12:54

Twist by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, InuKai, PG-13, 1300 words.
Kaidoh wants to kiss. Inui wants to play.

Disclaimer: Konomi, not me.
Cross-posted like a cross-posting whore.

( All Kaidoh wants to do is kiss. )

fic-author: prillalar, fanfiction, fic-rating: pg13

Comments 25

zero_sleep August 16 2004, 13:04:48 UTC

*incoherent mush* Wow. I... wow. The details in this are gorgeous, especially Kaidoh's rules and boundaries and oh! Inui being so careful because he really wants Kaidoh.

You're turning InuKai into my favorite, tooth-rottingly sweet, pairing. :P

prillalar August 16 2004, 23:00:08 UTC

Thank you. :) That's what thinking about the same scene for hours in a van will do.

You're turning InuKai into my favorite, tooth-rottingly sweet, pairing. :P

Oh, god, I really do worry about the sugar content of my InuKai. It's as smarmy as my hobbit fic. But...it's the Golden Boyhood thing. Right now, I just don't want them to be unhappy. I'll torment them later, I'm sure.

. . . i <3 u . . . feather_qwill August 16 2004, 13:19:15 UTC

*wibble* That's . . . absolutely georgeous . . . Where can I find more of your InuKai fics? Please tell me there's more! If there isn't . . . make more!

Re: . . . i <3 u . . . prillalar August 16 2004, 23:01:24 UTC

Yay! Thank you. I've written a couple of other short InuKai fics. They were posted to this comm or you can find them on my website in the PoT section: http://prillalar.com/fic/stories/cat_prince_of_tennis.php

Re: . . . i <3 u . . . feather_qwill August 16 2004, 23:47:36 UTC

Darn, none I haven't already read. -.-

You are a very addicting author, you know.

whitereflection August 16 2004, 13:22:50 UTC

<3 absolutely awesome--I just love the sound and the feel of the way the words flow. nice insight on the characters, and the little quirks to make them more human. Would love to see you write more of these guys. :)

prillalar August 16 2004, 23:02:23 UTC

Thanks so much! I do love these two so much. I've written them before and I will again, never fear.

darknightrain August 16 2004, 14:36:58 UTC

Why is it that your InuKai fics are always so IC, so detailed... so... perfect? ;__; <3<3<3<3
Because this is really how their relationship works and we all know it.
Also, the narrative was perfect. *more luff*

prillalar August 16 2004, 23:04:04 UTC

Hee! I'm very invested in their characterization -- I love them both so much, I really want to see how they play off each other. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

rikunghts August 16 2004, 14:43:15 UTC

*points to icon and squeals* Did you get that idea from You're My Only? That was so sweet! The chair thing happens in YMO, and it was the reason I bought it. SUCH a cute fic! ^_^ Thank you!!

prillalar August 16 2004, 23:06:52 UTC

Did you get that idea from You're My Only?

You mean for the chair thing? I think I have seen scans -- I do remember that particular pose. It's very intimate -- two people in a space meant for one -- and I thought it would work well with what I was trying to do. I remember a similar scene in An Officer and a Gentlemen, lo! these many years ago.

I'm really glad you enjoyed. :)