FIC: Symbols and Shortcuts by Halrloprillalar

[prillalar]

Symbols and Shortcuts by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, InuKai, PG, 1400 words.
Post-Nationals. The meaning of things.

Note: For disutansu, from her prompt, "library".

Comments

[snowym]

Their fingers touch and Inui almost forgets to erase anything.

I... umm... *brain is a big pile of mush now* That was so lovely, angsty, and lovely. With a liberal heaping of angst on top. But it was lovely. Inui's research and apprehension, and Kaidoh's fear and apprehension were perfect ^_^. Just... yeah, keep on writing InuKai ^____^. *<3's your fics, whatever fandom they are, though*

I'm gonna go to bed now, and have angsty dreams, where Inui gets his prince in the end. *nodnod*

[prillalar]

I hope your dreams all had happy endings! Thanks so much for such lovely (but not angsty) feedback. :)

[eriph]

Aww. I loved it. This was so sweet and sad. Inui's in love. Inui cries. Kaidoh doesn't get it. I like the spirals. I love the way you write Inui and Kaidoh as characters. Especially Inui. <3

[prillalar]

Thank you! Inui in love is one of my favourite things.

[sarahofcroydon]

Just simply beautiful, as always. ^^ I love how everything broils underneath, all those unsaid words... garrgh. Fantastic. XD

[prillalar]

Thanks, sweetie. :) This was a bit of a different take for me, with these two, and I'm glad it worked out.

[hamburgerjack]

I wasn't breathing the whole time I read this. It's amazing.

[prillalar]

That's so great to hear! (So long as you're breathing again now. *g*)

[kishmet]

This was such a great thing to read just before going to school. Inui being a sweet dork, angst, and those spirals...I'll never look at one the same way again. :) You always make me feel so much for the characters, whether they're happy or sad or anything else.

Beautiful. ♥

[prillalar]

Thanks, honey. :) I love these two so much, so damn much. I feel like I finally took them to a new place, if that makes sense.