Comments | intorolude: ten seconds to fall in love

intorolude

ten seconds to fall in love

Jul 19, 2009 21:42

ten seconds to fall in love
minho/taemin, onew/taemin, onew/key, jonghyun/key, jonghyun/minho
1001 words
an automatic chemical reaction.
( it is easy to fall for him, but it turns your life upside down and inside out until - )

writings, pairing: onew/key, length: oneshot, pairing: jonghyun/key, pairing: jonghyun/minho, genre: angst, pairing: onew/taemin, pairing: minho/taemin, fandom: shinee

Comments 16

jecca_o9 July 19 2009, 15:28:27 UTC

Omg it's a circle of heartbreak. /depressed

Beautifully constructed--I love how everything begins the same way and follows the same pattern.

redcottonstar July 22 2009, 09:10:18 UTC

:) thank you! glad you liked.

xing_lee July 19 2009, 16:44:12 UTC

Adding To Memories <3

It's beautiful and the discriptions are just so tact.
Great job, it seems very heartfelt.

redcottonstar July 22 2009, 09:10:28 UTC

thank you~

whennori July 19 2009, 20:45:03 UTC

OH, THIS WAS SO asdhakfjjhdsj lovely. I loved just about every part of it. Your writing is wonderful.

redcottonstar July 22 2009, 09:10:37 UTC

awjepfowuaer thanks *_*

irapehellokitty September 9 2009, 23:03:45 UTC

ohmy, this was beautiful, (i've had it up as a tab since like, the last time i commented here. -feels fail for not reading earlier-) just so effin' beautiful.

but it was also depressing. i loved the way you described everything. it had to be hard, seriously to follow the same pattern throughout the story and yet be able to come up with new similarties in every paragrafh, wow you go girl. i loved it. -gives you some hearts- keep it up. ~

lovestrucksmile October 3 2009, 17:55:06 UTC

Wow. I love it.

Great construction. You really made everything fit together. ♥