panic fic, "come down hard"

Feb 21, 2008 14:06

ryan/spencer, fiction. sort of a sex pollen story. just like certain kinds of tic-tics, this is not for children. ♥ beta most excellently and speedily by the lovely aeslis, written for disarm_d. the title is a reference to they live (but it was almost a reference to eisley's "invasion"). 1,780 words. edit: also posted on ao3 here.

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panic!

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disarm_d February 21 2008, 22:42:50 UTC
Oh my god, Elfie, this is AMAZING.

Like, aside from all the guhhh so hot and the OH MY HEART SPENCER AND RYAN ARE SO FRIGGEN ADORABLE I CAN'T STAND IT, there's just the part where you're a really friggen amazing writer.

He'd rubbed his neck afterwards and his hand smelled like herbs and flowers, like a garden doused in wine. This is GORGEOUS.

And then Ryan with the heat and the smelling Spencer and the whole entire presence of Spencersmithinbedohmygod in this story. Wow. So much Wow. This just blew me away.

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inthekeyofpike February 26 2008, 07:50:27 UTC
thank you ♥ ♥ ♥ i would have included the rimming scene and the actual penetrative sexytimes except it was like two in the morning, laura, and i couldn't figure out who would bottom. "it would be hot for ryan to ask for it," i said to myself, "but it would potentially be hotter for spencer to take it, oh my god," and then, uh, yeeeah.

it was a lot of fun. you should ask for random fic things more often. :D

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disarm_d February 26 2008, 17:35:28 UTC
OH MY GOD, I WILL! ALL THE TIME NOW! ALL THE TIME! EXCEPT WHEN YOU COME TO SEE MEEEEEE! THEN I WILL ONLY ASK THAT YOU TELL ME STORIES!

Also, I LOVE that you couldn't figure out who would bottom. That's actually seriously something that I wonder a lot with Ryan/Spencer. They have to take turns, it's the only option!

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battleofhydaspe February 22 2008, 19:31:54 UTC
The last line is a killer. I really liked this :)

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inthekeyofpike February 26 2008, 07:50:36 UTC
thank you!

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torakowalski February 22 2008, 22:15:46 UTC
Oh, I really like this. Your Spencer is fantastic and I love the ending!

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inthekeyofpike February 26 2008, 07:50:47 UTC
thank you :D!

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aylaranzz February 22 2008, 23:25:57 UTC
That was hot. Very, very nice!

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inthekeyofpike February 26 2008, 07:50:59 UTC
thank you!

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gypsycaravan February 23 2008, 03:02:18 UTC
This is really hot. You're an excellent writer, I totally loved this.

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inthekeyofpike February 26 2008, 07:51:14 UTC
thank you very much :D thanks for reading!

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