Week 2 entry for Brigits_Flame--"Fuel"

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Comments

[taste_is_sweet]

This is lovely. The melancholy and palpable guilt and sympathy of this is really well done. Thank you.

[intermezzo_poet]

Thank you so much! :) That means a lot, coming from you!

[mermaidbia]

I like the recursive nature of this piece, how you brought the cookies back to make the reader come full-circle and understand what's going on. Very nicely worded, too. Good job.

[intermezzo_poet]

Thank youuuu! :)

[intermezzo_poet]

Thank you so much! :)