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FIC: The Hiding Place (Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood)

Dec 14, 2011 14:43

Title: The Hiding Place
Author/Artist: ofankoma
Characters: Ginny/Luna
Prompt number: #125
Word Count: 5,800 words
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language
Summary: He hid them. Hid them both.
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine and no copyright infringement is intended. Thanks, JKR, for creating a wonderful world to play in.
Author’s Notes: The ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

mollywheezy December 15 2011, 00:29:48 UTC

Very well-written story! I loved Ginny's rant about George, and Luna's comforting her. Snape's protecting them was brilliant, and of course, Luna would be the one person who could see him.

I think you really captured the absolute creepiness of the Carrows, too. *shudder*

Excellent job, Mystery Author! :)

agirlnamedtruth December 15 2011, 00:49:31 UTC

That was unbelievably clever, it took me a minute to work it all out.

Also, it was beautifully written with so much depth, I absolutely loved it <3

Thank you so much for the fill :)

herbeautifullie December 15 2011, 03:20:41 UTC

God, this was beautiful. I love when I have to read everything to understand the story and how each piece fits with the another. Luna's knowledge of the world, how most think it's nonsense and in reality it's the truth is probably the most heart-breaking thing about this. I really enjoyed how she saw the best in the worst of people (Voldemort) and how she wasn't too ashamed to second-guess Ginny's accusations about Snape.

And Ginny! I love how strong she is here! Even when she's weak, she still has such a powerful voice in this story. She is powerful and compelling but still knows fear and loss.

Amazing, amazing work with this! I'm so glad someone pointed me in this direction! You did a great job with the prompt and this will most certainly be saved with my favourites. ♥

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herbeautifullie December 21 2011, 17:24:49 UTC

gin_again did! She was head over heels in love with this and I'm sure she'll be by to share her own feelings in a few days. She's just been very busy. ♥

Indeed, she is! And you captured her well! I look forward to reading more from you in the future! Do you mind if I friend your journal to keep up with your other works? :)

cabepfir December 17 2011, 13:53:01 UTC

The atmosphere and pacing, the sparse language and all the unsaid are the greatest point in this fic. The sense of weariness and alert at the same time, the willingness to fight and the necessity of finding a place not only to hide, but to recharge, to meet old - and new - friends, to find streght again. The words wispered and those which were never uttered, but sounded loud all the same.
Thank you.