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FIC: Breaking the Streak (Neville/Blaise)

Nov 15, 2016 07:00

Title: Breaking the Streak
Author/Artist: myfirstisfourth
Characters: Neville Longbottom/Blaise Zabini
Prompt number: 15
Word Count: 5045
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slash, Fluff, Humor, Developing Relationship, Dancing, Kissing, Groping
Summary: Neville knew he was incredibly unlucky, always had been. Needless to say the same issues extended to dating and romance ( Read more... )

*2016 fest, a: myfirstisfourth, .slash, *fic, p: blaise/neville

Comments 15

digthewriter November 15 2016, 13:48:29 UTC

Loved this!

Thank You! myfirstisfourth December 13 2016, 18:29:50 UTC

I am always happy to get positive comments from you. :) Thank you so much for reading me yet again. ;)

rowzen November 15 2016, 17:45:16 UTC

Well, I guess it's okay that they put out on the first date since technically, this isn't a date...

Thank You myfirstisfourth December 13 2016, 18:31:38 UTC

I really appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. :) Thanks.

katmarajade November 15 2016, 20:43:05 UTC

This is super adorable! I love how much interhouse love is in here, too! And the theme of coming together regardless of house after the war ... *happy sigh* Also, Neville is so lovably adorkable here! And I loved all the stories of his many failed romantic endeavors-- so funny! And Blaise's reaction to the Draco story was priceless. Great work, MA!

Thank You! myfirstisfourth December 13 2016, 18:36:26 UTC

I am so glad you liked it! :) I wasn't thinking of it in particular, as I wrote, but Neville Did do a lot for interhouse unity via his dating adventures. I could really call it community service when you get right down to it. HAHAHA I had fun dreaming up all of his messed up dates but confess, Draco's is the one I would love to flesh out more. LOL Thank you so much for reading and for the wonderful comments. :-D

ladyofsd November 16 2016, 23:55:05 UTC

I could Feel Neville and Blaise's wonderful chemistry through their easygoing conversation, fun banter, and palpable lust.

Love the juicy part about Neville and Draco. It's my favourite bad date story out of the bunch. I wouldn't mind a remix with those two, the party ending with more than just their masks coming off. :D

The ending is left open-ended, but I imagine Neville and Blaise hitting it off, perhaps even literally. Neville’s clumsiness would strike again, but the difference would be, it doesn't phase Blaise a bit. :)

A lovely fic! ♡

Thank You! myfirstisfourth December 13 2016, 18:45:40 UTC

Your comments always make me smile and often manage to stir even more New ideas (such as exploring Neville and Draco's "date" even further). HAHAHAHAHA I am thrilled the chemistry between Neville and Blaise came through well in the writing and that you enjoyed the story overall. It is Definitely the beginning of a Beautiful relationship between them, and I should know. LOL Thanks once again for reading and leaving such great comments. You know how much I appreciate them. :-D

sabethea November 27 2016, 16:13:09 UTC

Hee, this is brilliant. Neville going through his list of disastrous dates (oh gods, the Draco one! oh gods...) and Blaise being all laid back and entertaining about it. Lovely :) I wish them a very happy time together.

Thank You! myfirstisfourth December 13 2016, 18:52:15 UTC

I am so happy you enjoyed the story, it was a lot of fun to write. :) Hehehehehe! The Draco date was my Favorite!! I really want to know More about That one myself. ;) Maybe Another fest. HAHAHAHA! Blaise got his manin the end and the future looks bright for them both. Thank you for reading and for such nice comments. I always appreciate them.:-D