FIC: Taking the Next Step (Harry Potter/Padma Patil)

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Title: Taking The Next Step
Author: lrthunder
Characters: Harry/Padma (primary); Ron/Parvati (secondary)
Prompt number: #181
Word Count: 1391
Rating: R
Warnings: Nudity, sex
Summary: Harry wants to take the next step with Padma, if only Parvati would quiet down.
Disclaimer: I don't own the rights to any of the characters, nor am I making any money off of

Comments

[thimble_kiss]

Hee! I really enjoyed the sweet dynamic of Harry and Padma, and the contrast with the raunchy activities on the other side of the wall. No wonder Padma was a bit disheartened, poor babe. :) Nice surprise that it was Ron with Parvati (glad I didn't read the headers too closely!) and I loved the tricksyness with the privacy spells, too!

[lightofdaye]

Lovely fic! Definitely a nice sweet vibe between Harry and Padma and so clever of him to think of ways to solve her issues. Even if it didn't work! :D

Thanks so much for writing my prompt.

[katmarajade]

Awww, best laid plans and all! Harry's attempts at being gallant were adorable, and Ron's smirking comments in the morning were fantastic! This was cute. :)

[shy_of_reality]

hahaha loved the twist at the end! great job!