Comments | insomniadream: This is a story I've been working on. I'd love feedback..I'm new so be gentle! Sorry about sp..lazy!

insomniadream

This is a story I've been working on. I'd love feedback..I'm new so be gentle! Sorry about sp..lazy!

Sep 14, 2004 21:47

Hahahaaa!!! This is Meg hacking into Katie's account. I saw that her journal layout was all screwy so I had no choice but to try to fix it. Sort of. Also, I've taken the liberty of lj-cutting the story. There we are.

Katie, will be im-ing you later in order to tell you how to lj-cut. And so forth.

BWAHAHAHAAAAA!!

( 1st installment of katie's AWESOME STORY )

Comments 9

lil_tash October 20 2004, 10:47:03 UTC

hey this is really good! where do u get all the ideas? u studying english?

insomniadream October 20 2004, 16:25:35 UTC

Thanks!. I'm afraid the ideas just come from my warped mind. I thought about how interesting it would be if our souls were recycled and reincarnation was just commonplace...then the rest just kind of happened. I am studying english (though at the moment not so fun because I have class in ten minutes). I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your comment!

WOW! clueless_patty October 20 2004, 22:48:02 UTC

WOW! It's very good! U describe things very well and may I say it is very...um...wuts the word? COOL! WOw, souls being recycled...that's a neat idea...GOOD JOB! Oh, I'm looking for a friend to talk to u know so just check out my Journal and I might have a story u might like to read too...just click on the link that I gave and the site is called Fanfiction.net...search for Clueless-Patty and it will come to my bio.......scroll all the way to the end of the page and you'll see a link saying, "Where do I belong?" and that's my story kk? I'll appreaciate it if u read it and told me if it's gooa or wut I can do to make it better! THANKIES and great story!

Re: WOW! insomniadream October 24 2004, 22:41:34 UTC

thanks! I will!

Good... jack357 October 27 2004, 04:21:32 UTC

I'd the story beginning very much. The only thing I would like to see in your writing is some improvement with the structure of the paragraphs - like a space between them.

Re: Good... insomniadream October 27 2004, 04:25:59 UTC

very true. However, I am slightly inept and I cut and pasted my story from my word program into the lj...thus losing all my paragraph spaces. And I, being the lazy being that I am and in a hurry, decided not to bother to go through and change them. :) But, I will do my best to be unlazy (teh heh..new word!) in the future and put paragrahs (which it is probably obvious that I'm not big on paragraphs in general) in where they should reside! Thanks for commenting!

Re: Good... jack357 October 27 2004, 04:56:56 UTC

No problem, everyone neends positive comments. And I meant that I liked the beginning of the story.

jfua22 November 1 2004, 18:22:22 UTC

That was an awesome start. It is a very original idea and I am definitely looking forward to more

insomniadream December 3 2004, 07:12:59 UTC

Thank you!!! took me forever to reply, but yea!! Thanks for reading! I haven't been on in oh...a month and am...well lazy. :) But doesn't mean I don't appreciate