When life gives you lemons...

[insidel]

I placed my first short story up for review on Zeotroppe. Three reviews so far all mixed some scathing others complimenting but all perfect. I am so proud of myself. I took the critism well and this was a piece I had place a alot myself within. I knew the flaws and hearing them outloud spoke from complete strangers that had nothing to gain and

Comments

Hurray for story writing

[thehiredgoon]

Glad to hear that your story did well ;)

I'd like to read it sometime if ya' wouldnt mind me reading it :)
I've been a bit of a writer myself for the last little while mostly because I couldnt always find the kinds of things that I wanted to read.

In either case I'm sure you did a great job, your always terribly artistic :) :) :)
In any case, I gotta mosey on outta here, bye for now
I hope to hear from ya' soon.
Peace out :) :)

[liquidfantasy]

Mia I am a fan of your stories as you well know (even if the one I have is made just for me and our individual sense of humour) I will have an original Mia story from her early years! a collector's item in deed.

[insidel]

haha thanks for the support beki! and even though the stories I wrote for you were very cheesy I still have to say some hidden part of me is girly enough to enjoy them :)

Maria

P.S I have some of them on file too..I was doing a bit of spring cleaning and I found the valentine one I think that I did..haha...they saved my sanity in highschool..I swear they did

[liquidfantasy]

oooooh can you send me the valentine one if you still have it. I think I lost that one. I probably lsot it when the CD exploded. *sigh* I really liked that one. lol

[insidel]

-chuckles- Yah definatly if I still have it I will. I think I have a few of the stuff I wrote so I'll just attach it to an e-mail and send it to you...hopefully I will send it tomorrow..I'll leave myself a reminder. I don't think I ever finished that one..maybe I'll add an ending or something :)

Maria

[liquidfantasy]

Yeah you said you weren't sure where you had been heading with it and that you might finish it later. Anything you add I want to read. I love it!