The Shadow Kissed Prologue

Aug 24, 2010 18:21

So, to be honest, I’m only half way through the writing of this fic. As of now, it stands at almost 35K, but lately I’ve been wanting to strangle it. So to save it from the dung heap, I decided to start posting. Updates will likely be a once a week thing, since I’ll be going back to school in a week, but to make up for it, the chapters, other than ( Read more... )

pairing: yewook, ot3: kry, pairing: kyuwook, cho kyuhyun will be the death of me, series: shadow kissed, pairing: kyusung, kyuhyun makes me melt, yesung is one hot mother fucker, kry eats my soul, fandom!super junior, fics!series, kry is ot3 forever

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stripysockz August 25 2010, 01:41:14 UTC
THIS WAS SO WORTH STAYING UP FOR WHAT IS THIS HATING YOUR WRITING NONSENSE

It was so vivid! And the emotions were just flowing straight off the screen, I could practically feel the woman's terror (so if I get nightmares myself I can blame youuu!), and as for the murderers, you definitely got across the feeling of pure evil. Very dark, but in a good kind of way!

Cop!Yesung makes me happy. I'm not entirely sure why, but Yesung as a cop fits pretty well, I can totally see him with the coffee and the nightmares. But o.O in the dream it sounds like Kyuhyun dies... he can't DIE. No no no. We need live Kyuhyun! Otherwise the KRY would be necrophilia =/

ILU YOU NEED TO MAKE ME STAY UP LATE READING MORE OFTEN <33333

/needs sleep now

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insanityplays August 25 2010, 01:54:44 UTC
MY BRAIN HATES ME, IT KEEPS SAYING ITS CRAP ROFL

I'm glad, I was worried maybe that whole part wouldn't come across quite how I wanted it too ._. The dream portion was so hard for me. The beginning was my favorite part to write <3 ROFL Yes, you can blame me if you get nightmares XDD

...I was kind of in love with the idea of cop!Yesung as well rofl, that's probably half the reason this idea was born. AND LOLOLOLOL NECROPHILIA /DEAD

ROFL love you too <3 Maybe I will ;D

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stripysockz August 25 2010, 10:51:30 UTC
DON'T LISTEN TO YOUR BRAIN, IT LIES!

No it worked really well! And I didn't get nightmares, woo! Unless you count cleaning as a nightmare o.O

Cop!Yesung just WORKS! Idek. I'm totally in love with that idea now too XD

AWESOME <3

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insanityplays August 25 2010, 16:22:28 UTC
LOLOLOLOL

8D Good, no nightmares please D< and rofl Cop!Yesung makes my heart wibble a little bit 8D

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54dominoes August 25 2010, 02:15:37 UTC
THIS IS SO EXCITING. I see LEGIT GOOD WRITING SKILLS (rare). Plus, my ot3! =DDDDDDD

LOL, love the tags btw

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insanityplays August 25 2010, 02:44:14 UTC
8D Maybe other people's excitement will make me writer faster LOOOL and thank you, I'm glad you think I'm a good writer <3 Also, HELL YES, SOMEONE WITH THE SAME OTP 8DDD

:P Thank you 8D I had fun coming up with them. Can you see my bias? ROFL

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I fail sometimes insanityplays August 25 2010, 02:47:10 UTC
I meant write faster

Also, thank you for reading!

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ink_river10 August 25 2010, 02:32:10 UTC
WHOA. What is this "my writing sux" attitude? *thwaps you*

This was WAAAAY too realistic. *shudder* I'm glad you're writing, bb!

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insanityplays August 25 2010, 02:45:06 UTC
XDDDD I have my days LOL <3

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it <3

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rayneweather August 25 2010, 02:42:57 UTC
Wow, that was completely gripping from the very beginning. Your descriptions are so detailed & well done. The flow was great and the build up intense. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this. I know from personal experience with doctors who work with abused children that seeing horrible things tend to give people particularly nasty nightmares. It really does wear on the soul & mind.

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insanityplays August 25 2010, 02:46:32 UTC
<3 Thank you so much. I'm glad it sounds realistic :D I was hoping I'd done a good job of that. And D: Personal experience makes me want to hug you <3 I hope the rest of this will be just as gripping! Thank you for reading!

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myhlum August 25 2010, 05:09:49 UTC
i'll be stalking this i think.
- just don't kill us with so
much suspense hanging.

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insanityplays August 25 2010, 16:21:40 UTC
LOOOOOL I'll try not to kill you guys XD <3 Thanks for reading, and ooh~ Stalkers 8D

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