Hearts End

[insanityplays]

Minwook for Nina, with her sad ending.

Title: Hearts End
Author: insanityplays
Rating: R for sexual situations
Pairing: Minwook, Kyuwook, Onesided!Kyumin
Characters: Sungmin, Ryeowook, Kyuhyun
Summary: Sungmin had always been in love with Kyuhyun, so when Kyuhyun gives his heart away, it’s just not something Sungmin can let go of lightly.
Disclaimer: I do

Comments

[sujuot13yus]

TT_TT you! YOU!!
Why do you always manage to turn me into a blubbering fool? It's worse now, more so than when I've read any of your other works.

This was beautiful. It's my favorite piece of work from you. The imagery and figurative language was so flawless. I don't think I've read anything as amazing as this in a VERY long time. You've inspired me to write angst now!

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I believe that's the biggest heart I've ever given someone. Be proud, you wonderful person, you!

Oh, and I need to quote one part. Well, two, actually. The two parts that made this fic for me.

“But you love me too,” Ryeowook intoned quietly, fingers still working yellowed keys, eyes focused ahead, poker face in place. Sungmin’s smile dropped, his lips forming his natural pout, and his eyes hardened as he pushed away, face disgusted.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

Now they both knew the truth.

And:

That’s when it became revenge, because with each caress and gentle stroke, Sungmin drew Ryeowook away, slowly but surely, the siren on the bay, and Kyuhyun stood on the shore with his back to the water, his eyes glued to the image of what life with Ryeowook could be as Ryeowook surrendered to what he couldn’t see, because the siren had a pretty face, but his heart was ice cold.

I'm really sorry for this long and spammy quote... But I really do love this. A lot.

You're amazing.

[insanityplays]

8DDDDDDDDDD I usually write happy endings to the things I wrote, but I just couldn't for this one. It just wasn't possible, it wouldn't have been right, so xDDD I'm really glad you liked it, and to be honest, it's one of my favorite works as well :D

The second quote is honestly my favorite part of this entire thing. I love it so much it's not even funny. I had so much fun writing it, I can't even explain it LOL <333

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[sujuot13yus]

I usually don't read sad endings :PP I don't want to imagine unhappy things. But I made an exception. And this was wonderful <33333333

The second quote had me freaking out because it was so amazingly worded. You're amazing~ I wish I could write like that D: rofl

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[insanityplays]

LOOOOL I love you too <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

[sujuot13yus]

The internet on my phone is being gay. I can't send messages on lj. And msn is lame. But I'll remove this comment when I get home. Just thought I'd let you know I'm not ignoring you xDD <33

[insanityplays]

lolololol <3 i meant to comment back yesterday when i got this, i just got distracted xD Just message me when it works again <3