The Shadow Kissed Chapter Eight

Nov 14, 2010 13:53

Title: The Shadow Kissed
Author: insanityplays
Rating: R
Pairing: KRY (Kyuhyun/Ryeowook/Yesung), Kangteuk, Hanchul, Simin, Kihyuk, Yujae. More to be added as revealed.
Characters: Psychic!Ryeowook, Psycho!Kyuhyun, Cop!Yesung, rest of Super Junior + M, appearances by DBSK, SNSD, and f(x)
Summary: After a nightmare Kim Jongwoon forwent paying any ( Read more... )

pairing: yewook, ot3: kry, pairing: kyuwook, cho kyuhyun will be the death of me, series: shadow kissed, pairing: kyusung, kyuhyun makes me melt, yesung is one hot mother fucker, kry eats my soul, fandom!super junior, fics!series, kry is ot3 forever

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stripysockz November 14 2010, 23:08:41 UTC
Am I first? I AM first! I love being first, it happens so rarely!

Of course, someone will probably post a comment while I'm typing this. Then I won't be first any more. Awww.

YOU ARE BACK!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH I MISSED YOU?! AND THIS FIC. THIS IS THE BEST THING I HAVE READ IN A WHILE. I AM HAPPY NOW. THAT'S GOOD. YOU SHOULD BE HAPPY THAT YOU MADE ME HAPPY.

ajkhjdsjd I love how when there's been a break in updates when they start again whatever fic it is tends to be awesomer than you remember. This chapter was so so so good, WAIT A MOMENT - I just realised, I meant to address this in the previous paragraph but capslock distracted me and I forgot, YOU WERE SICK FOR LIKE TWO WEEKS STRAIGHT?!?! DDDDD: *bakes you a huge batch of virtual cookies (see icon for further details)* Get better NOW! - so back to what I was saying, I was pretty much on the edge of my seat while reading this, IT WAS SO GOOD.

Let's start with Kyuhyun. I feel for that boy in a very large way, the way he can still hear his mother is making me feel like I probably should have a theory for that, and wow no wonder he's feeling so angry! I want to give him a hug, but that might end badly. For me. He should go hug Yesung/Ryeowook, though, it'll eventually make him feel better. In fact, whatever comes after the hugging should also make him feel better! Translated into English that means that we should have some KRY soon, yes we should.

Ryeowookie, while I understand that you have noble intentions or some such nonsense, YOU DO LOVE YESUNG. Will you please just come to terms with that and stop pushing him away and make out with him (again) already! Etc etc. But I do love you ^^

Yesung bb, continue being amazing and noble and caring without trying to break up your relationships - he was good at that this chapter, yay! Awww him fussing over Ryeowook was just adorable <333 (in an angstily undertoned way...)

Sungmin realised that Yesung's Shadow Kissed! I foresee him trying to talk to Yesung about this, and now the phrase 'manly bonding time' is in my head, let's ignore that - and speaking of Shadow Kissed, the strangulation repeat episode set off my Not Good radar, this is bad, very bad =/

Siwon's scenes were intensely movie-like in their vividness and brilliance, so so fast-paced! Have I mentioned lately that I LOVE your writing style? And his last line!! WHAT an understatement XD

So to sum up: this was a mildly fragmented comment brought on by mild incoherency due to not-mild excitement at seeing you BACK! And of course the sheer awesomeness of this chapter, that also induced mild incoherency XD

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stripysockz November 14 2010, 23:09:27 UTC
See?!?!?! I AM NOT FIRST ANY MORE.

Curses.

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insanityplays November 15 2010, 00:01:03 UTC
LOOOOL OH GAWD I MISS YOU.

This is why people spot dearie XDDDD <3

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stripysockz November 15 2010, 16:18:07 UTC
But I was too excited when I saw you'd updated to think of spotting! And it seemed silly to spot when I'd already read it. See, this is all your fault: if you weren't so awesome then the fic wouldn't have distracted me and I'd have thought to spot and THEN I WOULD HAVE BEEN FIRST.

But I wouldn't want you to be any less awesome <333

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insanityplays November 15 2010, 23:51:15 UTC
ROOOOOOOFL <3

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insanityplays November 15 2010, 00:00:34 UTC
OMFG EMMMMMMMMMMMMMMA

YOU'RE COMMENT MADE ME SMILE AND GIGGLE AND MADE ME EVER SO VERY VERY HAPPY. I MISS YOU. A THOUSAND TIMES A THOUSAND. FOR ALWAYS. AND EVER. AND ALL THAT GOOEY STUFF. >.> Back to your regularly schedule comment now ^^

Oh and yes, I am extremely happy that I made you happy and you may have just saved this fic from my mental trash bin >.> But don't tell anyone ^^

/Takes Cookies. I will address the being sick in the email I send you after this love <3 I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I was all iffy on it again LOL may have been part of why it took a while to finish it :/ and would you believe, for the last week, I have actually been stuck on the very last portion with Heechul? It took me ten minutes or so this morning to finish off that bit only because I got unstuck and then it ended up ending pre-maturely because this sounded like a better place to end it

ROFL the KRY is definitely moving in very shortly xD Actually, in a chapter or two, this thing is going to slow down some just to develop on their relationship, and then speed right back up again. I actually can't wait to write that part ;D

LOOOOOOOOL Ryeowook has some issues he needs to work through. You didn't think I'd make this easy, did you? And Yesung's probably the only one of them who's had a some what sane up bringing. I think it's probably easier for him to deal with things that don't make that much sense (if you get what I mean lol)

ROFL MANLY BONDING TIME! XDDDDD And oh yes, the strangulation should be setting off some alarms. Someones desperately trying to get Yesung's attention and make him see something that may or may not be obvious.

LOL The Siwon scenes took me the longest to be honest, but I'm glad they came out well ^^

I LOVE YOU BB, AND YOU'RE FRAGMENTED, INCOHERENT COMMENTS BECAUSE THEY KIND OF MAKE MY DAY LOL.

I'm going to answer that email now...LOL

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stripysockz November 15 2010, 16:43:30 UTC
(imagine that this is all in massive massive font, because that would make the comment awesomer but I'm not sure how to do that and knowing me I'd make it smaller or upside-down or something by mistake >.>)

I MISS YOU SO SO MUCH DARLING! GLAD I MADE YOU SMILE <333

*sneaks into your mind and steals the trash bin to prevent any 'accidents'* Stop doubting yourself!! This fic is AMAZING, and I don't mind how long you take to update, so long as you don't give up! If you do give up, I will have to come over there and give you a piece of my mind. And THOSE plane tickets would be expensive. But lol yes that writer's block does sound very familiar, been there! I think you ended it perfectly though!

KRY soon?! EXCELLENT. That makes me all happy inside yay! And slowed down for relationship building? APROVAL APPROVAL. Variety is the spice of fanfiction, remember that. (And I'm a romantic sap, remember that too ^_^)

Haha yeah, I get what you mean - it would be no fun if it was easy anyway! I don't honestly know where manly bonding time appeared from, other than some strange unfrequented part of my mind...

Hmm, so the spirit is trying to give Yesung the message that... umm... spirits don't like psychic people? That... Ryeowook has a BDSM kink?! (Oh look, things are coming from that strange unfrequented part of my mind again...) That... Ryeowook's in danger? That... it's dangerous for them to be together? Hmm, too many theories. We'll go with the BDSM one.

The Siwon scenes came out VERY well!!! You should be proud of them! I'm not surprised they took ages though, they were pretty complex (and genius).

I LOVE YOU TOO BB, YOU AND YOUR AMAZING FICCAGE MAKE MY DAY TOO <333

I'm going to answer that answer to the email sometime very soon, I hope... but for now I should go do homework. Or I'll be shot. BUT WE SHALL TALK SOON!!!

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insanityplays November 15 2010, 23:54:23 UTC
ROFL <3 < font size = #1-7 > < / font > for bigger font ^^ See, we learn something new everyday :P

LOL Removing temptation would probably be a goo idea >.> Although I think we're safe for now <3

...I think I just died of laughter. I suppose that's not a horrible way to die, is it? NO, RYEOWOOK HAS NO BDSM KINKS XDDDD Has more to do with Kyuhyun then Ryeowook darling <3

Hope to talk to you soon! :D

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stripysockz November 16 2010, 15:42:55 UTC
To do with Kyuhyun, you say? Ohh, KYUHYUN must have a B- uhh, never mind ^_^ Um, no, the spirit is trying to say that Kyuhyun is in danger/wants to kill Ryeowook/is disliked by spirits because he can talk to one of them aka his mum and the spirits don't think he should be allowed to do that, but they can't take it out on his mum because she's one of the nicest spirits and makes ghost-cookies for everyone on Saturdays :D

/goes to reply to email

...This is what happens when I learn a new skill ^^ But thank you for teaching me! <3

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insanityplays November 16 2010, 23:40:37 UTC
/dead.

Oh I do miss you, dear XDDD <3 NO! ROFL

And you're welcome! :D

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