Ficlet: Electric Blue

Jan 20, 2009 19:57

Title: Electric blue ( Read more... )

syelle, fanfiction

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superkappa January 21 2009, 06:32:28 UTC
This made me cry. I just...I can't help but feel bad for Elle. She really got the short end of the stick for almost her whole life, and you portrayed that so beautifully and so tragically.

I love that ending though, that her powers kind of taunt him now. That he can't completely enjoy them. Fitting somehow.

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insanityclings January 21 2009, 07:15:04 UTC
I'm sorry I didn't mean to make you cry. I'm glad you liked the ending. I thought Elle deserved to have at least some form of justice.

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superkappa January 21 2009, 07:29:49 UTC
Don't apologize. It was the good kind of cry. Catharsis :)

She totally does deserve it, and that was a great way to give her some.

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insanityclings January 21 2009, 07:46:05 UTC
Oh well if it was cathartic then I'm glad I could help. Elle really does deserve so much more than she got. I mean is it too much to expect Sylar to be a little broken up about what he did to her.

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superkappa January 21 2009, 07:58:13 UTC
Well, he seemed kind of remorseful as he was watching the fire? But that's about as much respect as any death gets on that show.

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insanityclings January 21 2009, 08:07:36 UTC
True. Maybe it's just me but I thought that was probably more ZQ than the writers because later on there's a line where he mentions Elle and the way it's written just makes him seem like he doesn't really care. As if he believes she deserved to die because she helped make him a killer even though he already forgave her for that.

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superkappa January 21 2009, 08:10:11 UTC
It probably was just ZQ. God knows he had a better explanation for Sylar killing her than the writers did.

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insanityclings January 21 2009, 08:16:15 UTC
He did. ZQ is awesome.

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superkappa January 21 2009, 08:18:38 UTC
He is. I really have nothing but respect for that man. He's so talented.

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