Comments | insaneantics21: Cabin Fever [7/10]

insaneantics21

Cabin Fever [7/10]

Sep 18, 2010 22:33

Title: Cabin Fever
Pairings/Major Characters: Rachel/Finn, eventual Rachel/Quinn, Rachel's dads (Bruce and Michael), Judy Fabray.

Mentions/Minor: Finn/Santana, Quinn/Finn, Quinn/Puck, Brittany/Santana
Other Characters: The rest of New Directions, a couple of OC's, and mentions Jacob Ben IsraelRating: R
Length: ~3,100/~33,000 (subject to change)
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insaneantics21 September 19 2010, 03:47:13 UTC

Revenge of the Fishes!

It's twatswatting when it's two girls, apparently. I had to look it up on urbandictionary for a later part...=P

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let_me_stop September 19 2010, 04:35:15 UTC

You made me laugh so hard with the fish thing... And the conversation with Santana. That girl is legend. And I was laughing sooo much when Rachel's dad walked in on them :D

Also, I don't see why you aren't happy with this chapter, it's brilliant!

insaneantics21 September 19 2010, 17:41:12 UTC

=D That wasn't originally in there but I needed some filler and comic relief. Rachel getting smacked in the face with a fish seemed like the best idea.

I'm not happy with it because I don't think it flows. It's rough and choppy and the transitions kind of suck. But thank you =)

novak_fan September 19 2010, 05:04:36 UTC

I second everybody's thoughts, I don't see a problem with this chapter at all. Fluff FTW! :) I'm an angst junkie but it's nice from time to time to have so quality fluff as well. Besides, they are so adorable that I can't even...I'm enjoying this too much :)

insaneantics21 September 19 2010, 17:41:37 UTC

Well thank you =) There is more fluff to come, I promise!

varconc September 19 2010, 05:10:11 UTC

I'm loving the Rachel Quinn dynamic that you've drawn (: they've been honest with one other from the start, even as enemies (just that they didn't know it) and that really creates something very raw and intense. They've never been able to hide their feelings from one another (the angry fights, the spontaneous hug in the forest ( ... )

insaneantics21 September 19 2010, 17:43:04 UTC

Whoa, epic comment is epic! I'm so glad you like it and thank you so much for taking the time to read and let me know what you think! =D

orangekwekkwek September 19 2010, 05:40:14 UTC

"She only looked up at Quinn with the droplets of water cascading down the blonde’s forehead and over her face and suddenly became very aware of her heartbeat: fast and threatening to burst out of her chest."

awww.. love this!

insaneantics21 September 19 2010, 17:45:24 UTC

Glad you love it! =D