Comments | insane_songbird: Third Party Ripoff 2/5

insane_songbird

Third Party Ripoff 2/5

May 27, 2010 22:09

Pairing: Jared/Jensen

Rating: NC17

Words: 4,200/19,400

Warnings: Violence, minor character death, blood, drugs, spies, slash, sexual innuendo and more if I feel like it

Disclaimer: Slavery is bad and I am a liar. The title is actually a La Femme Nikita episode on which inspired this verse to a certain degree, knowledge of the show is completely ( Read more... )

third party ripoff, j2au, fanfiction

Comments 22

hunters_retreat May 27 2010, 20:39:05 UTC

Tee hee hee! Love the tension in this! Can't wait for more!

insane_songbird May 27 2010, 20:41:19 UTC

Yes,yes, the tension is building muhahahahah!
Now I am just contemplating if I can use one of the other banners for the next post or if it will confuse people too much :P what do you think?

hunters_retreat May 27 2010, 20:59:18 UTC

I think you can use one of the other ones! They were amazing! You should totally be showing those things off :P

oldbatj May 27 2010, 23:48:17 UTC

I'm enjoying this so much that I'm feeling stressed because there are only 3 more chapters to go !!

Fantastic portrayal of Jensen as the shady and very cool arms dealer and transporter......oops i make him sound like an oak tree...sorry.

And your Jared, always the wary but competent undercover guy....really so true to how he'd react to his supporting players and the whole shifty situation. Well done !! Can't wait for more. You and Jensen started my morning off with a bang ( poor Richard's too!) and now you're ending my day the same way! Phenomenal !

insane_songbird May 28 2010, 05:04:47 UTC

Ehehe... yeah. But it's short with a BANG :P
If you got oak trees like THAT I think I need to immigrate to wherever you are and live in you backyard!
hehehe! Glad you liked the wake up call ;) *hugs* B

celefinwe May 28 2010, 03:42:37 UTC

More! More! More!

Maybe I should just wait until you upload all the chapters before reading. All this waiting is doing a number on my blood pressure :P

insane_songbird May 28 2010, 04:52:20 UTC

Oh dear... there wasn't even anything too naughty in this one ;) But the wait will not be long, I promise :P

aubergineautumn May 28 2010, 06:28:29 UTC

hhahaha.He called a helicopter.*I need that phone function*

insane_songbird May 28 2010, 10:47:24 UTC

That's an iPhone app people would love, right? ;)

mangacat201 May 28 2010, 07:29:19 UTC

tehehehe--- new one, eh, ok, one thing I noticed though, most people probably don't get that the trailer is a new and improved version... better put that in with the next chapter
Cat

insane_songbird May 28 2010, 10:47:59 UTC

okay. Will do, babe.