Better Odds

Mar 28, 2012 20:04

TITLE: Better Odds
RATING: PG? PG-13?
WORD COUNT: ~3300
FANDOM: Supernatural
CHARACTERS/PAIRING: Dean/Castiel (mostly pre-slash), Sam, Garth, Meg, and one other who I am keeping secret because it is a ~spoiler~ for this fic
SUMMARY: The obligatory post-7.17 fic.
WARNINGS: I feel like "Dean Winchester's inner monologue" needs to be a warning. (Mostly ( Read more... )

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morganlucas41 March 29 2012, 02:11:59 UTC
I LOVE THIS. There are so many little things about this that I love, but mostly that this is exactly how I want things to go.

Dean’s still about two-thirds asleep and honestly kind of smells like ass, but of course there’s a giant fucking hug. Of course.
This is PERFECT, and yeah, this is the first time Sam's really been Sam since before Hell, isn't it? Wow.

Guy came back twice in six months and disappeared about five minutes after that anew.

Actually, no - he didn’t disappear. That would’ve been better, the rush of wings and then nothing ever again, because Dean would’ve ached and hated it but Cas would’ve been alright. Cas could take care of himself, after all. No, Cas didn’t disappear.
I love this - bleak and hopeless and rings so very true. Your Dean voice is spot-on, btw.

Daphne really being Anna - I love this idea! I'd love it if that were true. And dysfunctional Team Free Will is reunited, but damn it, I'd really root for this team.

Anyway, this is basically canon for me, and I loved it :)

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inplayruns March 29 2012, 02:34:23 UTC
Thank you so much!

I guess Sam was Sam from when he got his soul back to when Cas broke his wall. But the whole time, things were so tense about that wall possibly breaking, that I really do feel like this is the first time Sam has been really and truly Sam since "Swan Song." Or at least, that both Sam and Dean can appreciate that Sam's back.

I'm really glad my Dean voice worked here. Normally I just make him pretty funny, but the guy is a million kinds of depressed, which is difficult to write, and his world is just getting bleaker and bleaker. Hopefully things get better for him, both on the show and in this little 'verse :)

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harper47 March 29 2012, 12:20:38 UTC
I absolutely adore this. And I love the new Team Free Will. Wonderfully creative, full of Dean perfectly in character, thank you so much.

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inplayruns March 29 2012, 15:54:34 UTC
Thank you! Like I said above, I'm really glad I got Dean in-character. It's really difficult to mix his humor and depression.

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dimensionallyt March 29 2012, 12:59:31 UTC
Super Team Free Will!

Clever Daphne fix.

If this were to happen 7x17 would be redeemed!

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inplayruns March 29 2012, 15:52:43 UTC
Thank you! I actually liked most of 7.17 a lot, but the last what, two minutes? were just extremely rushed and made me want to write fix-it fic so badly :p

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gabriel4sam March 29 2012, 14:43:23 UTC
Anna!! Oh, you're a genious! And the end, with Team Free Will 2.0 is glorious!

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inplayruns March 29 2012, 15:55:04 UTC
I JUST HAVE A LOT OF TEAM FREE WILL AND MINOR CHARACTER FEELS ;_____; Thank you!

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dazedrose March 30 2012, 12:39:19 UTC
Team Free Will extended edition. More please. Love how you ended it but you left us wanting more. Beautiful

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dazedrose March 30 2012, 12:39:45 UTC
Oh and daphne = Anna. Was brilliant!!

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inplayruns March 30 2012, 15:30:43 UTC
Thank you! I wish I had any ideas for actual ~adventures~ @______@

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