*throws a bon-bon at you for all the 'nervous' talk*
This was fantastic! You had them spot-on! The nudgy, friendly-but-wishing-for-more, teasing balance was perfect.
I loved all the little details you put into it: like Sam offering him back the eggnog (he so spiked it!), Sam's hair being static-y, and the little leg nudge at the end.
LOL! Is a bon-bon food? *munches* Well... what can I say? I'm a nervous, paranoid freak. ;)
This means SO MUCH to me coming from you, because you write SG-1 (and them!) so very well. Maybe now that I've posted my first, I'll feel more able to write more S/J. I think it was just that initial "OMG, I know so many great writers for SG-1, and mine is gonna suuuuuuuck" feeling that I needed to get over.
I'm glad the little details worked for you! I was rather fond of them. And I'm glad you noticed the passing back and forth of the same cup. I feel like they're the kind of friends who wouldn't think twice about drinking after each other.
And he did spike it. Are we really surprised? LOL.
haha, a bon-bon is a food yes, but I was actually leaning towards the Christmas bon-bons. What do you call them? Crackers? You put them on the table and pull the ends - you get a hat, a toy and a dodgy joke?
Aw, shucks! *kicks imaginary rocks* Thanks for the compliment, you're so kind (not to mention good for the ego, lol). But of course, now that you've show that you can do it, you have no excuses not to write more!
It's the little details that make me love a fic, and you're right, they would share a cup without hesitation. It's one of the things I love about them - and you've caught it so well in your fic - that they'd pass back food and drink, clothing, ANYTHING without hesitation, but the mere thought of spending any unofficial time together terrifies them.
And nope, not surprised. Of course it was Jack. Ripper zorted to Pirate, who gave him the rum, who zorted back to Fisher, who then spiked the eggnog. It's a Three Jack Production.
Hmmm... I'm actually not that much of a fic bugger actually. I mean if you mention an idea THEN I'll bug you till you write it, but I manage to contain myself most of the time ;)
And I knew it. What else would you need three Jacks for...
Christmas Crackers! Those are so cute, and I've never heard of them before! Sounds fun.
I need 3 Jacks... because I do. They're taking very good care of me while I'm sick. (Dr. Magnus must have been held-up fighting dangerous Pollywogs or Snorkacks.)
This was fantastic! You had them spot-on! The nudgy, friendly-but-wishing-for-more, teasing balance was perfect.
I loved all the little details you put into it: like Sam offering him back the eggnog (he so spiked it!), Sam's hair being static-y, and the little leg nudge at the end.
LOVE!
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This means SO MUCH to me coming from you, because you write SG-1 (and them!) so very well. Maybe now that I've posted my first, I'll feel more able to write more S/J. I think it was just that initial "OMG, I know so many great writers for SG-1, and mine is gonna suuuuuuuck" feeling that I needed to get over.
I'm glad the little details worked for you! I was rather fond of them. And I'm glad you noticed the passing back and forth of the same cup. I feel like they're the kind of friends who wouldn't think twice about drinking after each other.
And he did spike it. Are we really surprised? LOL.
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Aw, shucks! *kicks imaginary rocks* Thanks for the compliment, you're so kind (not to mention good for the ego, lol). But of course, now that you've show that you can do it, you have no excuses not to write more!
It's the little details that make me love a fic, and you're right, they would share a cup without hesitation. It's one of the things I love about them - and you've caught it so well in your fic - that they'd pass back food and drink, clothing, ANYTHING without hesitation, but the mere thought of spending any unofficial time together terrifies them.
And nope, not surprised. Of course it was Jack. Ripper zorted to Pirate, who gave him the rum, who zorted back to Fisher, who then spiked the eggnog. It's a Three Jack Production.
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*groans* Does this mean you're going to be bugging me to write fic for you? ;)
LOL. Yes, however did you find me out? I've got them all working hard for me.
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Hmmm... I'm actually not that much of a fic bugger actually. I mean if you mention an idea THEN I'll bug you till you write it, but I manage to contain myself most of the time ;)
And I knew it. What else would you need three Jacks for...
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I need 3 Jacks... because I do. They're taking very good care of me while I'm sick. (Dr. Magnus must have been held-up fighting dangerous Pollywogs or Snorkacks.)
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