suzywoo - 9/10

[kanintallrik]

Title: Fight fire with fire
Author: kanintallrik
Pairing: Wooyoung x Suzy, (onesided Suzy x Minho)
Rating: pg-13
Genre: highschool!au
Summary: For Suzy, winning the school dance competition marks the start of her new, amazing life. It doesn't really end up that way, but it's pretty okay anyway. Suzy's doing her best to socialize with her peers, but

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[dreamoscope]

He forcefully squeezes past Junsu in the narrow hallway and promptly greets Suzy with a delighted humming from deep in his throat, chomping down on her shoulder once for good measure.
CHANSUNG OMG.

“We shouldn’t use it.” Chansung says suddenly, and both Taecyeon and Suzy turn to look at him questioningly, but he only has eyes for his snack. “It’s Wooyoung’s thing. We shouldn’t use it.” he clarifies, and nods shortly towards Taec.
UGH I LOVE YOUR CHANSUNG. really. i think he might be my fave character in here, taec probably taking the 2nd place ahaha.. or maybe jia. theres something about the way you characterize your characters that makes them individually interesting. for characters like junsu, to be honest i wasnt expecting much, but the way you make him keep yapping and sending moony eyes at fei is just.. LOVE. its like theres all this dimension of your characters that is more than what meets the eye, and its lovely :D

chanjia omg. i love them... and junfei - lol i still remember how he sleazily asks for a hong kong massage in one of the JYPN mv bts.

and ugh he woozy in this, i love their mini interactions, and the back n forth that you can see theyre totally into each other but just holding themselves back. the kiss is sweet, wow i actually like it that suzy takes charge. hahaha. oh and im totally wondering why wooyoung's mom is so strict o.o

sad that this is ending soon, but i hope you'll continue writing more stuff for the 2pm fandom lol (i dont really venture much out of it lol, so im selfish like that )

[kanintallrik]

haha i was afraid i overdid the characterization a bit, like enforcing their stereotypes.. it's a delicate balance there but i'm glad you think i did a good job XD i don't even care much for junsu but he's fantastic in 2pm show - which i btw blame for how he came out here... i haven't seen that junfei moment but when it comes to chanjia i always think of this fancam; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1nZh34RhPA

as for wooyooungs mom, i think she's just normal XD my folks wouldn't be that calm if i stayed out past midnight without a word.. and as for the kiss, fem!dom ftw :D

well if you're gonna leave me wonderful comments like this i'll just have to keep writing 2pm ;___;