Never To Betray You Again - Chapter 20

[inoo_hime]

Title: Never To Betray You Again Chapter 20
Disclaimer: I didn't own anything except for the plot
Main Character: Yabu, Inoo, Yaotome, Arioka, Yuya, Yamada, Chinen
Genre: romance, mystery, friendship, thriller and death
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kota locked himself to the world for 3 years and he even have times that he wanted to die already but he

Comments

[inoo_hime]

Like always you have a long comment but like always i said that i love this kind of commentsXD

Don't worry i don't have any plan on dropping this fic. Actually i am doing some plotting of the story on my notebook, i am already around the 3/4th part and near to the climax already. I have everything on my head but i need to write them so that i can't forget. After that I'm going to start writing the next chapters after Chapter 20 and because of that it will take me long time to post for updates since i need to check everything first (check that everything that happened on each chapter are all connected properly and so that i didn't miss any important details) before i post them. Writing mystery type is really complicated because you can't just drop everything in one go... you know you need to do some teasing so that readers will feel more thrill in reading hehe.

Anyway i am glad that you are understanding the story the way i want to execute it. Maybe i am doing a good job on this LOL >__< Kota's situation is really a disaster... i don't think i can survive as well if i was him.

[jyj4everfan]

Yeah you're right, writing this kind of fic really takes time. I actually really admire all mystery writers because I know I wouldn't be able to write one haha. And I know it's hard to write one because like you said, you really have to plan out how you're going to work out the story since just one simple mistake can ruin the flow of the story. So I actually understand if you will not be able to update this fast. Don't worry, like I said before, I'm good at waiting haha^^ And yes what's good about mystery if there's no tease? XDD You need to make your reader feel excitement about what's going to happen next and of course, it would be even better if there's some plot twist in the story haha. I love plot twist XDD

Thanks for adding me btw^^ I don't usually ask people to add me here in livejournal because I kind of feel shy and I feel like I'm annoying them XDD