First you give John back his Mary, but then you take her away again, you take Jess away from Sam but then you bring her back. You have John lying and hiding things from his boys (nothing new there) but you also make Mary trick them. That's what this fandom was missing, brotherly incest was getting a little old, bring on the maternal incest.
I really don't know who I feel sorrier for, John, Sam or Mary. To paraphrase Chuck, you are a 'cruel and capricious God'
This fic was awesome! Perfect start to Big Bang! I love the bit of back story you had on Mary and John - they were so sweet and in love and it was beautiful. Sam going of to college was interesting, the little tweaks you make *sighs* if only they were canon. Sam and Jess <3. Such a beautifully written story (even if it was kinda sad and bitter sweet in parts), you should be very proud of yourself! As always the Trickster comments bring smiles, that man is my God ;) Loved it hon! x
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First you give John back his Mary, but then you take her away again, you take Jess away from Sam but then you bring her back. You have John lying and hiding things from his boys (nothing new there) but you also make Mary trick them. That's what this fandom was missing, brotherly incest was getting a little old, bring on the maternal incest.
I really don't know who I feel sorrier for, John, Sam or Mary. To paraphrase Chuck, you are a 'cruel and capricious God'
Thank you for sharing.
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I love the bit of back story you had on Mary and John - they were so sweet and in love and it was beautiful. Sam going of to college was interesting, the little tweaks you make *sighs* if only they were canon. Sam and Jess <3. Such a beautifully written story (even if it was kinda sad and bitter sweet in parts), you should be very proud of yourself!
As always the Trickster comments bring smiles, that man is my God ;)
Loved it hon! x
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