Very nice! The voices sounded great, and I like the sense of history you gave Johnny and Reed--and by proxy, Sue and Ben. I got a good sense of how the bonds of teamwork are starting to build.
This was really good...wasn't sure where it was headed at first, but I enjoyed the dynamic between the two and the development of Reed's character through Johnny's eyes. Very nice scene btwn the 2.
Damn, that was good. Not a single creepy overtone (strangely, enough, I found myself actually thinking by the end that perhaps Reed/Johnny wouldn't be such a bad thing after all).
Just really, really good. I like how you used Johnny's comfort with social situations translate into insight into Reed's feelings and thoughts, and the right things to say to him.
Just thought I'd let you know this was really well written, and I love the way you show the relationships between characters. I'm telling you because having searched far and wide, I came across this; almost the only piece of fanfiction I've found for the movie so far, which both surprises and disappoints me. *sigh* Anyway, hope you don't mind that I commented, and go you.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) fantastic_4_fic has a few stories, but it doesn't seem to be setting off a fic-boom, unfortunately. I keep hoping for more. And coming up with plot bunnies of my own in the meantime. ;)
Plot bunnies are always good. ;) I suppose the film only came out over here yesterday, so maybe y'know, people have yet to see it in order to fic it. I live in hope.
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Just really, really good. I like how you used Johnny's comfort with social situations translate into insight into Reed's feelings and thoughts, and the right things to say to him.
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