FIC: The Whole Damn Alphabet (2/?)

May 31, 2012 01:59


Title: The Whole Damn Alphabet (2/?)
Author: inlightofvisa
Rating: PG13 (slash)
Genre and/or Pairing: Canon AU, Derek/Stiles, Danny/OMC, background Scott/Allison
Spoilers: Season 1
Warnings: Um, there will be blood later? And also, OMC. Hopefully not a Gary Stu.
Word Count: 1688
Summary: There's a new kid in school. Stiles likes him. Danny likes him more.
Notes: Um, so ( Read more... )

the whole damn alphabet, danny, jackson whittemore, allison argent, whoa, derek hale, the part where the plot shows up, scott mccall, stiles stilinski, ryan nichols, derek/stiles, omc, scott/allison

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secretkinks May 31 2012, 17:49:41 UTC
Is a Gary Stu like a Mary Sue? If so and you're worried about it you could use this http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm

I like that Stiles was all like "He and Ryan must be friends." I know in High School whenever there was a new kid people would judge whether or not they'd be friends almost instantly so that part was pretty realistic imo.

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inlightofvisa May 31 2012, 18:49:02 UTC
Yup, Gary Stu is the male equivalent to a Mary Sue. And I think I've done some reading and stuff on it, and Ryan isn't really turning out to be a Gary Stu so I'm happy.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked that part--I think I really liked it too.

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inlightofvisa May 31 2012, 19:37:10 UTC
Although, according to the link that you gave me, Ryan is for sure a Gary Stu. Which, I do acknowledge because the role I thought up for him is kinda important. Um. Oops?

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secretkinks June 1 2012, 00:51:07 UTC
lol I think that the link is kinda harsh but I figured if there was a chance it could be helpful I'd post it anyway. :) I like Ryan so far so no worries!

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inlightofvisa June 1 2012, 08:04:13 UTC
It was definitely helpful with things to look out for. And thanks! I'm really hoping that people like him because it's actually really fun to write him.

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