I had to get this out of me, and I'm quite happy with how it turned out. Enjoy.
Title: Love in the First Degree
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Disclaimer: This is only fiction.
Summary: Changmin vacates his seat and although he is the one leaving, his heart is the one being broken.
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The grey of the sky waits for the rain, )
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I love the style you wrote this in, very interesting ^_^
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Thank you for this.
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;________________________________;
Oh whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. ;____;
I still love you,” you confess. The words you should have said. You get onto your knees, and raise your voice. “I still love you,” you say, and it’s not a question.
...WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OH WHY CHANGMIN YOU STUPID BAG OF HAMMERS. STUPID. STUPID. ;_____________; aslkjf;wlkef;alkdsjf;lkajsdfwera
...SAME FOR YOOCHUN. sldfkj:LSJDFSLDKJDS FLKDSFJGSDL GAH. *superglues them back together*
;_; I love you. ;_; ♥ *crawls somewhere to die*
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alsoooo: Changmin vacates his seat and although he is the one leaving, but his heart is the one being broken. -- think you might have left the 'but' in accidentally or something? just thought i'd give you a heads-up. :)))
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*facepalm* This is what happens when you only proof-read once. Thanks for the heads-up, darling.
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and haha, it's no problem. i actually never proof-read mine save for the misspellings ff3 finds, so. >.>
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