Love in the First Degree ; Yoochun/Changmin

Jul 06, 2008 11:21

I had to get this out of me, and I'm quite happy with how it turned out. Enjoy.

Title: Love in the First Degree
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Disclaimer: This is only fiction.
Summary: Changmin vacates his seat and although he is the one leaving, his heart is the one being broken.

The grey of the sky waits for the rain, )

fic: dbsk, rated: pg-13, length: one-shot, pairing: yoochun/changmin

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ttaejoong_hyuk July 6 2008, 03:45:21 UTC
T-T so sad yet beautiful....gosh...angst yoomin....errrrgh....changmin...i feel for you!!! >___

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thevignette July 6 2008, 04:35:35 UTC
Thank you :D

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narcolept_smurf July 6 2008, 03:58:49 UTC
Ooooh, that was so beautiful!! Poor Minnie T_T

I love the style you wrote this in, very interesting ^_^

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thevignette July 6 2008, 04:36:01 UTC
Thanks, it's a new style, so I'm glad you like it :D

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mumbles July 6 2008, 04:00:23 UTC
Aa angst. A bitter pill for the soul. :)
Thank you for this.

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thevignette July 6 2008, 04:36:13 UTC
Thank you for commenting :D

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yuxo July 6 2008, 04:05:37 UTC
...

;________________________________;

Oh whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. ;____;

I still love you,” you confess. The words you should have said. You get onto your knees, and raise your voice. “I still love you,” you say, and it’s not a question.

...WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OH WHY CHANGMIN YOU STUPID BAG OF HAMMERS. STUPID. STUPID. ;_____________; aslkjf;wlkef;alkdsjf;lkajsdfwera

...SAME FOR YOOCHUN. sldfkj:LSJDFSLDKJDS FLKDSFJGSDL GAH. *superglues them back together*

;_; I love you. ;_; ♥ *crawls somewhere to die*

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thevignette July 6 2008, 04:37:21 UTC
Thank you ♥ I love you too, and the superglue is a good idea, those silly boys clearly need it.

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xiahtic July 6 2008, 04:21:50 UTC
oh god. sdkfhsdfjk this was beautifully heartbreaking. ♥ just. yes.

alsoooo: Changmin vacates his seat and although he is the one leaving, but his heart is the one being broken. -- think you might have left the 'but' in accidentally or something? just thought i'd give you a heads-up. :)))

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thevignette July 6 2008, 04:38:35 UTC
Thank you :D

*facepalm* This is what happens when you only proof-read once. Thanks for the heads-up, darling.

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xiahtic July 6 2008, 04:43:42 UTC
you're very welcome!!! *__*

and haha, it's no problem. i actually never proof-read mine save for the misspellings ff3 finds, so. >.>

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