This was written for
comment_fic today, but it actually exceeds the comment box word limit (oops, good job they're not strict about that) so I'm sticking it here. It's for
mahmfic who keeps leaving brilliant prompts. Shame I can't write them all, but I'd love to read them if anyone else feels like heading over there... I live in hope ;)
Title: Live In Hope
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ETA: Urrm, I'm tired, and I was mostly focusing on Jack up there. I wasn't lumping Tosh's mother in with the hee! fun! part. That was sad, but really well done.
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Heh, no worries. I'm pleased you think that worked.
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i loved how you portrayed everyone. i dunno why but i love ianto wearing a clip-on tie. and jack forced to stay at the hub.
thank you again!
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I was tring to keep the personalities the same as much as possible, just change the jobs, so Ianto would be his smart dressing, practical self, so ties are good > ties that dangly into autopsies not good > clip on tie.
Glad you enjoyed it :D
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I really liked Tosh as leader. She seems to get stuff done.
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I figured that Tosh usually gets things done, it's just so much in the background that people don't notice it. Until, say, Daleks show up in the Hub. I think that if she had a little more confidence and was the leader, Torchwood would probably be a lot more efficient.
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