I’ve been reading this story for awhile now(and loving it, I’m new to fandom, this story was one of the first things I read, which actually got me into suju fanfic)and I think it’s high time for me to review it. Even if the quality of the review isn’t the best, hopefully you can make something out of it.
Epic break out scene was epic! You have a very visual way of writing that can make someone really see what’s going on. Not usually a problem with authors until it comes to the action and suspense of the story. People have probably told you that you’re very good at the whole adventure/action/suspense part of writing so I won’t waste time rambling about that. But Heechul's out! Finally! Now Hankyung and Heechul can go off and live happily ever after.(yeah, in my crazy dreams) Although, now I’m a bit worried that this is only the beginning of Heechul’s mental problems. I mean, how is he going to react to being under the complete control of these people and what he did while under it. Angst.
Is it bad that I was happy when I heard that Siwon and Donghae were trapped? Probably, but I love angst and drama revolving around my favorite couples/characters, so my KiHae(and very Donghae biased)heart is all giddy. Kihae and Donghae plot ftw! I loved Kibum’s reaction, lips pale, raw fear….it made me happy. I’m a terrible person..:D One of my favorite parts of the chapter though, was Kyuhyun. Well, he’s one of my favorite things about the story, so. But at the end, it was both sweet and sad when he said that he needs Zhou Mi cause he doesn’t have enough morals without him. The Qmi in this story is really fantastic. I’m convinced either Kyuhyun will somehow fix Zhou Mi before the stories end, or one of them will die…(idk why I think that, you aren't that cruel, most likely)I personally hope it’s the former.
And the end….You really have a thing for cliffhangers, don’t you? This should be very interesting.
yup, it's only the beginning of Heechul's angst fest. I say that I don't like writing angst but then I write things like this and I just up the ante all the time so that it's constant angst orz. Same with the Shihae thing in this chapter; it wasn't supposed to happen, it just did as I was writing it XD
I like your QMi theories~ we'll have to wait and see. And yup, I like cliffhangers, I like leaving people hanging and wanting more XD
Epic break out scene was epic! You have a very visual way of writing that can make someone really see what’s going on. Not usually a problem with authors until it comes to the action and suspense of the story.
People have probably told you that you’re very good at the whole adventure/action/suspense part of writing so I won’t waste time rambling about that. But Heechul's out! Finally! Now Hankyung and Heechul can go off and live happily ever after.(yeah, in my crazy dreams) Although, now I’m a bit worried that this is only the beginning of Heechul’s mental problems. I mean, how is he going to react to being under the complete control of these people and what he did while under it. Angst.
Is it bad that I was happy when I heard that Siwon and Donghae were trapped? Probably, but I love angst and drama revolving around my favorite couples/characters, so my KiHae(and very Donghae biased)heart is all giddy. Kihae and Donghae plot ftw! I loved Kibum’s reaction, lips pale, raw fear….it made me happy. I’m a terrible person..:D One of my favorite parts of the chapter though, was Kyuhyun. Well, he’s one of my favorite things about the story, so. But at the end, it was both sweet and sad when he said that he needs Zhou Mi cause he doesn’t have enough morals without him. The Qmi in this story is really fantastic. I’m convinced either Kyuhyun will somehow fix Zhou Mi before the stories end, or one of them will die…(idk why I think that, you aren't that cruel, most likely)I personally hope it’s the former.
And the end….You really have a thing for cliffhangers, don’t you? This should be very interesting.
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yup, it's only the beginning of Heechul's angst fest. I say that I don't like writing angst but then I write things like this and I just up the ante all the time so that it's constant angst orz. Same with the Shihae thing in this chapter; it wasn't supposed to happen, it just did as I was writing it XD
I like your QMi theories~ we'll have to wait and see. And yup, I like cliffhangers, I like leaving people hanging and wanting more XD
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