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not_cynical in inkandkarma

FFX-2: The Importance of Names

Apr 15, 2008 22:16

Title: The Importance of Names
Rating: G
Word Count: 649
Characters: Baralai/Gippal
Notes: Written for the 100,000 Words of Mantouching Project. Sense-making not promised.

( The Machine Faction had gone to a lot of trouble to decorate for the new members. )

[14days of fic], ffx-2, ffx-2: gippal, ffx-2: baralai

Comments 4

dior_anghel April 17 2008, 05:15:04 UTC

I wish I had more to say about this than, I love it so goddamn much.♥

So many little touches that completed it - like Baralai's temptation to stare at his hands, or the bit about how Gippal smells. And I love, of course, that Baralai isn't able to hide much from Gippal.

YOU KNOW YOU'RE AWESOME, RIGHT?

not_cynical April 19 2008, 18:04:43 UTC

Aw, thank you Dior! *hugs* I'm glad you liked it, and you thought the details worked.

AND NO I DIDN'T, BUT THANK YOU FOR SAYING SO.

gysecune April 19 2008, 03:35:43 UTC

I agree on the levels of wondrousness in this. ♥

"But if you're gonna abandon me for a load of old men, you can get out there and start making speeches so I don't have to." Hahaha, Gippal. XD

not_cynical April 19 2008, 18:06:52 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. :D

(Hehe, I'm glad you liked that line! It seemed like exactly the sort of thing he'd say. >))