Cheaters Never Win [1/2]
Rating: PG-13
Chapter: 1/2
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: As fake as my starvation after eating a crapton of pizza.
Summary: It comes and goes, this light, throughout the course of your life, but sometimes, John thinks he's the only one conscious of it.
( Screaming Bloody Murder. )
Chapter: 1/2
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: As fake as my starvation after eating a crapton of pizza.
Summary: It comes and goes, this light, throughout the course of your life, but sometimes, John thinks he's the only one conscious of it.
( Screaming Bloody Murder. )
I am once again speechless, but I'm going to try and say something other than: OMG YOU ROCK (which you DO btw)
So um, your descriptions of everything are SO original, and the way you put the words together makes so much sense, I'm not even sure I can describe it to you. But I'll just quote a few of my favorite lines.
He says, his excitement somewhat reminiscent of John's earlier years, the ones he couldn't remember without a certain blurriness at the edge of his visions and his eyes ringed red from all the tears he's never cried. YES. SO amazing because it's such a beautiful way to say that he's never let out his tears.
he wishes he had something stronger, so that maybe it would burn his throat, but he only has this dull buzz that turns up the volume on his dull heartbeat, and he has these dimly lit eyes that for some reason he can't take off of his best friend Once again, amazing way to say that.
John is trapped in his own mind, because Godonly knows that no one will be able to hear him if he spoke, let alone played a wrong note or sang a false lyric AND THAT. Was just amazing.
So, these sort of lines are the ones that I'm talking about, with the original ways to put things that I would definitely NEVER think of and the way the words flow together so beautifully...it just blows my mind.
So amazing once again, I love every single one of your fics. :)
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