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infinityuphigh

Rain (Without Saying Goodbye) [s/a]

Apr 06, 2010 16:21

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Disclaimer: Burn me alive if this is real, promise.
Summary: “You’re a fuckin’ bastard, John, for doing this,” he says. Paul’s clothes stick to his thinning frame with the moisture of the sky. John would have felt offended by the comment if the rain wasn’t still falling, falling, falling.

( Here, There, Everywhere. )

john lennon, the beatles, paul mccartney

Comments 25

spirit414 April 6 2010, 22:56:00 UTC

You've killed me once again. And I know I saw that every damn time, but JEEZ. You've killed me with this. Again.

So great. You know, I don't even know what to say anymore, because I feel like I'm just repeating myself over and over. You are amazing, this piece is AMAZING. Everything about it is compltely perfect.

You are seriously the best writer I think I've ever encountered on a place like this, so I really hope you do something with it someday. :)

It was just beautiful.

infinityuphigh April 6 2010, 22:58:02 UTC

Wow, thank you so much -swoons- that's such an awesome thing to say! I really appreciate you reading and commenting and I owe you like, a million thanks for your kind words -hugs-

ohjames April 6 2010, 23:12:01 UTC

YES. Oh, yes. I'm not a fan of dream sequences but this is something else.

I can't quite express what this means to me or why. You've done an amazing job. I think that's a mark of a good writer -- you've left me confused about my own psyche, unsure why this touched me so much, and so glad it did.

... he sees the remnants of John in the laugh lines surrounding his eyes...
I got that far before I teared up. Quite a feat.
UGH so good.

infinityuphigh April 6 2010, 23:16:38 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :)

pauliejohnny1 April 6 2010, 23:12:19 UTC

Just this. YOU are a genius, no exaggeration:)

infinityuphigh April 6 2010, 23:16:54 UTC

XD Thanks!

tangerinetani April 6 2010, 23:12:41 UTC

I'm crying!

This was beautiful.

infinityuphigh April 6 2010, 23:17:57 UTC

Thank you! I really apprecite it :D

beatlegirl70 April 6 2010, 23:57:44 UTC

They’re teenagers and Paul is yelling at John for taking the train home without him. They’re eternal and Paul is yelling at John for dying without a final goodbye - a formal one; one that Paul would have no doubt performed himself, had the roles been switched.

This part just did me in.:(

This was both heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. How do you do that??

Fantastic job!:)

infinityuphigh April 7 2010, 00:18:03 UTC

Thank you so much! :)