Incomplete drabble, need help! x_x
This is an incredibly short drabble, a tribute to Sakura and the people she encountered in her life and how they helped her to develop into the character she transformed into timeskip. Each sentence is supposed to present/imply a certain number of characters that have helped her to realize her flaws and want to change them. (I'm having a difficult time in deciding whether or not to make this part of the 100 drabble thing (Oh, shit, I forgot the word! ><)
The themes I want to try and include are:
- Support/strength
- Wisdom
- Reliability
- Value/Sacrifice
- Love; self-confidence/respect
Fifteen pillars are her heart's desire.
Five made her stronger, cutting through the open forest in broad light for all to see.
Four made her wise, as wisdom is greater than knowledge.
Three gave her meaning, because there is no purpose in life without one.
Two she would give her life for, because she would never forgive herself if anything happened to them.
Finally, the last taught her how and what it means to love, not only others, but herself as well.
With this in mind, she keeps breathing. They are all that she thinks, all that she sees and knows. She keeps living for them... for him.
The ending is awkward and doesn't seem to fit, but I want to try and keep it at 100 words. D:
Also, do you think the formatting emphasizes the point, or should I just get rid of it? x3