ISS 2011: FOR TRINKETRIES

[comebackmods]

To: trinketries
From: Your Secret Santa.

Title: Diagnosing Acute Pneumoencephalopathy
Pairing/Focus: Sunggyu/Woohyun (with a ninja appearance from Dongwoo/Hoya)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: very, very vague reference to possible sexual abuse).
Word count: 3,773
Summary: Sunggyu really dislikes celebrity patients. Woohyun really doesn't care.

Comments

[sunlit]

s-sobs omg i don't even know where to begin, to be completely honest with you! ;a; this completely made my day; it made me ache and it made me smile, all at the same time. i like the duality of this story, set in the bleak environment of hospitals and the shady entertainment business and the dark past that haunts victims of sexual abuse; you balanced out all these dark themes with humour and the lightness of falling in love. it's a brilliant contrast between black and white, and in the midst of it all, there's the beautiful, beautiful characters that you wrote! *U* woohyun and sunggyu are charming in their own ways and i found myself empathizing with both sides, feeling the emotions both characters felt. i love the way you wrote them, really! ;u; ♥ OH and the yadong hahahahahah oic dongwoo someone walked in on you and howon i seei know i'm not the best comment-giver and that that was probably the most incoherent and rambly comment you've ever seen, but thank you so much for writing this, i thoroughly enjoyed it! c: i can't wait to

[canttakeabreath]

sobs sighs TYSM i am glad the humor balanced out the tinges of darkness!

no omg this was super qt tysm!! ;;

[sunlit]

SOBS IT'S YOU I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR FICS ;AAAAAAA; and ofc this one is no exception; thank you so much for the wonderful read! you did such a stellar job with this fic, really :')

[canttakeabreath]

SIGHS AND SOBS I AM ALWAYS WAY TOO OBVIOUS ;; omg thank you so much! that is legit super sweet of you to say ♥♥♥

[sai12]

I really liked this! I loved the witty dialogue! And the reality of Woohyun's situation. How over worked idols are and...ugh..yeah so good!

[canttakeabreath]

tyyy. and yes they are uch i always feel superly bad for people like t-ara ;;

[isaya_sama]

I really like the fact that it's told from Sunggyu's perspective as a non-famous person about a famous soloist Woohyun. It's so damn obvious and it's been obvious for a long time already, that the majority, especially the boy groups, are being overworked. You need to look perfect, sound perfect, have perfect character; overall, you just have to be perfect and it's damn ridiculous to expect from a human being to be perfect.
Didn't mean to stray from topic, it's just that I hate when they're being overworked. Anyways, I really loved this fanfic, especially Sunggyu's character and the conversation was just too freaking awesome. Must say though, I loved Agents One and Two. (:
Man, I laughed so freaking hard at this sentence “Oh my god. Where do we keep the brain bleach.” DAEBAK!! ^__^v

[canttakeabreath]

it is really hard to watch these kids work themselves to the bone ;; AGENTS ONE & TWO YEP. ♥ glad you liked it!

[grapefruitade]

asdfghjkl;
the love I have for this woogyu fic is astounding, omg.
everything about this was near-flawless \(; u ;)/

Especially when they get caught on the roof while Sunggyu’s on break and Woohyun is allegedly getting a cataract checked out by Sunggyu’s tongue.
best line, tbh /flails

I love how you hinted at darker themes, yet was able to keep everything light-hearted and humorous; I love how sunggyu's able to just notice the tiniest of details in relation to woohyun's health (and I love how you wrote said details); I love how woohyun's such an ass, yet such a lovable one too (oh namstar, you and your ego~); I also love dongwoo's last comment about leeteuk, LOL.

and then I googled the title because I was curious as to what exactly "acute pneumoencephalopathy" was... all I can really say is "I C WAT U DID THAR." xD

but yeah, this is just. sdkfhksdjh. nice. lovely. wonderful.

[canttakeabreath]

aww thank you! sunggyu was deluding himself Trying Not To Notice ♥

ROFL OH GOOD SOMEONE GOT MY JOKE YAY ♥ :D

tyssssm!

[peachytao]

pwahahahaha
acute airhead woohyun
XD

[trinketries]

Oh my goodness, this was wonderful.

You wrote Sunggyu and Woohyun so beautifully. I love the dialogue between the two of them and the way how they clash, but that at the same time Sunggyu shows bits of sympathy for Woohyun (and I like that you show why Sunggyu thinks and acts that way). I really like how you hinted at the darker aspects of the entertainment business, too. It was a great contrast to the rest of the fic.

I think that Sunggyu's perspective worked great for this story. His thoughts and comments made it easier to understand where he was coming from, and also to help us sympathize with Woohyun as well.

I also enjoyed the parts with Sunggyu and Dongwoo interacting, whether Dongwoo was trying to be helpful or just antagonizing Sunggyu a little.

... and I adore the bits of Dongwoo/Hoya. Oh yes. ♥

I just. I want to quote so many things and say so much, but words are failing me. This fic was everything that I wanted, and then some. Thank you so, so much. I hope that you had a lovely holiday. ♥

[canttakeabreath]

oooh, thanks so much!! i'm really glad the contrast think worked for you. i wanted to keep it light but not underplay the srsbzn issues at stake!

♥ aww thank you so much really. this was a super cute comment TREASURES. ♥